Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Focus on precise vocabulary (e.g. "shots" or "angles") and avoid repeating ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos when I travel. For example, I often try different angles and compositions because they help me express my emotions and document my discoveries. As a result, each picture tells a story about that place.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, then add two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. "I come from the countryside"), avoid vague phrases like "their everything" and finish the sentence. Use vocabulary related to scenery and atmosphere.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside. Firstly, the landscapes are more natural and peaceful, with rolling fields and traditional houses. Secondly, the air is fresher, which makes photographing outdoor scenes more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear reasons; avoid confusing phrasing. Use correct structures (e.g. "I prefer views in my own country because..."). Provide specific examples of what you like about your country's scenery and avoid political or vague statements like "signify the national power" unless clarified.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I feel a personal connection to its landscapes. For instance, I enjoy capturing historic towns and familiar countryside scenes that reflect our culture and development. Also, local travel is easier, so I can revisit places to take better shots.

× Yes, when traveling out my hometown I like take different positions or pictures which I think can express and signify my emotions and a lot of my explorations on these pictures so I love it so much.

✓ Yes, when traveling away from my hometown I like to take different poses or pictures that I think can express and signify my emotions and many of my explorations, so I love it very much.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'out' should be 'away from' (Grammar problem type ID 11), missing to-infinitive after 'like' so 'like to take' (ID 8), incorrect noun 'positions' when referring to poses in photos (ID 13), awkward relative clause and quantifier 'a lot of my explorations' — better 'many of my explorations' (ID 14). Suggestions: use 'traveling away from' for leaving a place, use 'like to take' for habitual actions, use 'poses' or 'photos' for photographic positions, and replace 'a lot of' with 'many of' for clearer quantification. Make the sentence clearer by breaking into clauses with 'that' and using 'very much' instead of repeated 'so'.

× To be honest, I come from countryside so I prefer views in rural areas which I think their scene race and their everything so naturally beautiful and and you know, their air and their fresh air you can take is so.

✓ To be honest, I come from the countryside, so I prefer views in rural areas because I think their scenery and everything are naturally beautiful, and their air is very fresh.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'countryside' (Grammar problem type ID 22/17), incorrect pronoun usage 'their scene race and their everything' — 'scenery' is correct and 'everything' should not be possessed repeatedly (ID 12 and 13), subject-verb agreement 'their scenery ... are' (scenery is singular so 'is' or treat as plural 'things are') (ID 27), awkward and duplicated phrases 'their air and their fresh air you can take is so' — wrong structure and word order (ID 20 and 26). Suggestions: use 'the countryside', replace 'scene race' with 'scenery', avoid repeating 'their' before every noun, choose correct verb agreement (e.g., 'is naturally beautiful'), and simplify the final part to 'their air is very fresh.'

× I prefer will see my own country, which I think and can it is can signify the national power on my country and and now my country is becoming stronger and stronger than before. So I prefer with my country, yeah.

✓ I prefer to see my own country, because I think it can signify my country's national strength, and now my country is becoming stronger than before. So I prefer my country, yes.

Errors: incorrect use of 'will' after 'prefer' (should use infinitive 'to see' for preference) — future/modal misuse (Grammar problem type ID 7 and 4), incorrect word order 'which I think and can it is can' (sentence structure error ID 26), incorrect preposition 'on my country' (use 'of' or possessive form 'my country's') (ID 11), redundant phrase 'stronger and stronger than before' (prefer 'stronger than before') (ID 20). Suggestions: use 'prefer to see' to state preference about viewing, restructure the clause as 'because I think it can signify my country's national strength', use the possessive 'my country's', and simplify comparative phrasing to 'stronger than before.'