Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning, correct vocabulary and grammar, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words (e.g. “membranes”, “Chad”) and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different places because they help me preserve memories and share my experiences. For example, when I travel I photograph markets and streets to remember the local culture, and later I look at these photos to recall details I might otherwise forget.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear preference and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), and avoid vague phrases like “it depends” unless you immediately explain why. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. peaceful countryside, career opportunities in cities).

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views, but if I had to choose I prefer cities for their variety and opportunities. For instance, urban areas offer vibrant street scenes and cultural events, while rural areas provide peaceful landscapes for relaxation.

Gợi ý: Be direct about your preference and give concrete reasons and examples. Correct grammar (tenses, articles) and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words (for example, moreover) to connect ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences with specific details about what you learn from other countries.

Ví dụ: I prefer experiencing views in other countries because traveling exposes me to new cultures and languages. For example, living in Canada has taught me different social customs and improved my English, which I believe will help my career and personal growth.

× All I reckon Chad taking pictures of diff distinct places is a good way to capture membranes in one frame.

✓ All I reckon is that taking pictures of different places is a good way to capture moments in one frame.

The original sentence has missing and incorrect words and word order. 'Chad' and 'membranes' are incorrect word choices; likely intended 'that' and 'moments'. Also the clause needs a complement: 'All I reckon is that...' is correct structure. Use 'different' (not 'diff') and correct noun 'moments'.

× Even we can all learn more about different cultures and languages when we were when we are exploring different places.

✓ We can all learn more about different cultures and languages when we explore different places.

The original mixes past and present ('were' and 'are') incorrectly. The correct general fact uses simple present: 'when we explore'. Remove redundant 'even' and duplicated 'when'.

× So yes, I like to take pictures of each and every moment of my.

✓ So yes, I like to take pictures of each and every moment of my life.

The sentence is missing the noun 'life' to complete the phrase 'each and every moment of my life'. Without it the sentence is incomplete. Adding 'life' corrects the object of the preposition.

× Honestly speaking, it's totally dependent on time and situations.

✓ Honestly speaking, it totally depends on the time and the situation.

Use simple present 'depends' for habitual facts. 'Dependent on' is correct but 'dependent' as adjective requires 'is', but 'depends on' is more natural. Use definite article 'the' with 'time' and 'situation' when speaking about general context.

× But these days I prefer both areas, urban areas for different opportunities because we can get so many opportunities in cities rather than in villages.

✓ But these days I prefer both types of areas: urban areas for different opportunities, because we can get many opportunities in cities rather than in villages.

'Different areas' is vague; 'both areas' should be 'both types of areas'. 'So many opportunities' is acceptable but 'many opportunities' is more concise. Ensure plural 'areas' matches 'both'.

× But we can say that villages is also known as peaceful environment.

✓ But we can say that villages are also known for their peaceful environment.

Subject-verb agreement: 'villages' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Also use 'known for' (not 'known as') and add possessive 'their peaceful environment' to be natural.

× We can enjoy our special moments.

✓ We can enjoy special moments there.

Original is acceptable but to refer to villages context, add 'there' or restructure: 'We can enjoy special moments there.' This clarifies location.

× Honestly speaking, right now I'm living in Canada rather than my own country India.

✓ Honestly speaking, right now I'm living in Canada instead of my home country, India.

Use 'instead of' for preference/contrast and 'home country' is more natural than 'my own country'. Comma before country name is optional but improves clarity.

× So I prefer different countries because we can learn so many things from different cultures and we can even learn different languages as well by knowing other people.

✓ So I prefer visiting different countries because we can learn many things from different cultures and even learn new languages by meeting other people.

Add verb 'visiting' to indicate action. 'So many things' -> 'many things' is concise. 'Different languages as well by knowing other people' is awkward; use 'learn new languages by meeting other people.'

× So I prefer to live in different area in order to become a successful in our life so that we can do anything for our parents and even.

✓ So I prefer to live in different areas in order to become successful in life so that I can do anything for my parents.

Multiple issues: 'different area' should be plural 'different areas'. Remove extra article before 'successful' and use 'successful in life' without 'a'. Use consistent person: 'I' not 'we' to match speaker, and 'my parents' not 'our parents'. The ending 'and even' is incomplete and omitted.