Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember places I've visited. For example, I often photograph landscapes and city views to capture the atmosphere and colors.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in urban areas because I love my city skyline, especially at night when buildings and St. lights create a lively atmosphere. Compared with the countryside, city views feel more dynamic and full of energy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in my own country because I grew up there and many places remind me of my childhood. Although I enjoy visiting foreign countries, familiar landscapes makes me feel comfortable and proud.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且相关,但可以更直接先给主题句,然后用更具体的细节和连词丰富回答,避免过多重复(如“help me remember places”与后句略有重叠)。建议在回答中加入具体例子(某次旅行或某种景色的细节)并使用连接词如“for example”或“in particular”来增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes — I love photographing different views. When I travel I usually take landscape and cityscape shots to capture the unique atmosphere and color palette; for example, in Kyoto I photographed temple gardens at sunrise to record the soft light and reflections on the ponds.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答明确但有少许语言不自然(如“St. lights”应为“street lights”),句子可更紧凑并加入连接词使逻辑更顺畅。建议用一两处具体细节(例如夜景中特定建筑或灯光效果)来支持观点,并注意词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city skyline, especially at night when street lights and illuminated skyscrapers create a vibrant scene; for instance, I like photographing the waterfront at dusk when reflections double the lights.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答情感真挚,但存在小语法问题(如“landscapes makes”应为“landscapes make”)且可以用更具体的回忆或对比来加强内容。建议在主题句后用连接词(e.g. “because”/“for example”)补充一两个具体记忆或地点,以增加说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of my childhood; for example, the rice terraces near my hometown bring back memories of family picnics and festival parades, so I feel both comfortable and proud.
× I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember places I've visited.
✓ I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember the places I've visited.
句中缺少定冠词“the”。在指代说话者曾去过的特定地方时应使用定冠词“the”。建议:在“places”前加“the”,表示特定的已访问地点。
× I prefer views in urban areas because I love my city skyline, especially at night when buildings and St. lights create a lively atmosphere.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I love my city's skyline, especially at night when buildings and street lights create a lively atmosphere.
原句中“my city skyline”需要所有格形式“my city's skyline”来表示“我所在城市的天际线”。“St. lights”是不正确或缩写错误,应写为“street lights”。建议:使用所有格并将缩写展开为“street lights”。
× Although I enjoy visiting foreign countries, familiar landscapes makes me feel comfortable and proud.
✓ Although I enjoy visiting foreign countries, familiar landscapes make me feel comfortable and proud.
主语“familiar landscapes”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”而不是单数“makes”。建议:确保主语为复数时使用动词原形(或复数形式),即“make”。