Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question directly, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order mistakes, avoid redundancy, and keep the response to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoyed taking photos as a child and I still like capturing interesting scenes such as landscapes, my pets and moments with friends. However, since I started working I have less free time, so I try to take pictures mainly on weekends or during vacations.

Gợi ý: Make your preference clear at the start, use precise vocabulary, and avoid filler sounds. Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g. because, therefore) and an example to support your choice. Fix word choice errors such as 'patient' and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views. I like cityscapes because they offer varied architecture and lively street scenes, which are great for photography; for example, I enjoy taking evening shots of illuminated buildings and busy promenades.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you prefer local or foreign views and give specific reasons. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, verb forms) and reduce hesitation. Add a brief comparison and a clear concluding sentence within five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country for now because I live in a small hilly town with many flowering trees and refreshing scenery, which I find breathtaking. However, I would also like to visit other countries in the future to experience different landscapes and cultures.

× When I was a child, I loved taking photos. I would capture the scenery, the house, my pets, my with my friends, my college and so on.

✓ When I was a child, I loved taking photos. I would capture the scenery, the house, my pets, my friends, my college and so on.

The original sentence contained an extraneous 'with' that disrupted the list and the gerund structure 'taking photos'. Remove the extra word to restore proper parallel noun phrases. Also ensure items in a list are separated by commas for clarity.

× I love taking pictures in every moment. Yet as I grew up and when I started working, I really get the time to take photos and.

✓ I loved taking pictures all the time. But as I grew up and started working, I really did not get the time to take photos.

Tense inconsistency: opening clause used present 'I love' while referring to childhood; change to past 'I loved' to match 'When I was a child'. The later clause used present 'get' incorrectly; it should be past 'did not get' because it refers to the time after growing up. Also remove the trailing 'and.' which is incomplete.

× Cities and big towns are well developed and clean and more uh have more standard in terms of patient and infrastructure.

✓ Cities and big towns are well developed, cleaner and have higher standards in terms of public services and infrastructure.

Awkward adjective/adverb use and incorrect word choice: 'well developed and clean and more uh have more standard' is ungrammatical. Use comparative 'cleaner' and noun phrase 'have higher standards'. 'Patient' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'public services' or 'amenities'. Rewording makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× So for me, I love the views of uh the cities in urban areas where I would love to take pictures and have an evening walk along with it.

✓ So for me, I love the views of cities in urban areas where I like to take pictures and go for an evening walk.

Redundant and awkward structure: 'the views of uh the cities in urban areas' and 'have an evening walk along with it' are ungrammatical. Remove filler words and restructure: 'like to take pictures and go for an evening walk' is natural. 'Along with it' is unnecessary.

× I live in a very small town which is a hilly and have lots of flowers and trees.

✓ I live in a very small town which is hilly and has lots of flowers and trees.

Subject-verb and adjective use: 'a hilly' is incorrect because 'hilly' is an adjective and does not take 'a'. Also 'town' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have'. Correct to 'which is hilly and has lots of flowers and trees.'

× So, uh, the views are refreshing and breathtaking and this is a great view for me.

✓ The views are refreshing and breathtaking, and this is a great place for me.

Slight word choice and cohesion: 'this is a great view for me' is odd if referring to the location; 'place' is more natural. Keep present tense 'are' because the speaker describes current characteristics.

× I haven't uh, explore other countries yet but uh, I would love to visit other countries and see the view.

✓ I haven't explored other countries yet, but I would love to visit other countries and see their views.

Incorrect verb form after 'haven't': use past participle 'explored' not base form 'explore'. Also add a comma before 'but'. 'See the view' is vague; 'see their views' or 'see the views' is clearer and plural matches 'other countries'.