Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words for coherence and correct small grammar errors (e.g. "I'm close to the mountains"). Aim for varied vocabulary (e.g. "landscapes", "scenery") and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy photographing landscapes, especially mountains and rivers, because I live near the mountains and find the scenery inspiring. For example, I often walk to nearby viewpoints to capture sunrise light on the peaks, which helps me practise composition and timing.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitations and unnecessary repetition. Correct grammar: use plural/noun forms properly ("rural areas", "I have lived there"). Be concise and stay within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer diverse natural scenery and peaceful settings. For example, I grew up in Bhojpur where I lived for several years and often photographed rivers, mountains and large forests, which allowed me to capture tranquil landscapes without city distractions.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of preference and then give specific reasons and examples. Remove filler words ("uh", "that") and correct grammar ("there is much natural beauty", "Kathmandu, the capital"). Mention 1–2 concrete examples and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer seeing views in my own country because Nepal has so much natural beauty to explore. For instance, places like Mustang and the Kathmandu Valley offer dramatic mountain scenery and cultural landmarks, so I often choose to visit them before travelling abroad.

× Well I would like to take many pictures or different views such as mountains, rivers and to explore the nature because I'm I'm so close to mountain and I love to take pictures of different views.

✓ Well, I would like to take many pictures of different views such as mountains and rivers and explore nature because I'm so close to the mountains and I love taking pictures of different views.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' before 'explore' (parallel structure requires base form or -ing), 'the nature' is incorrect article usage and uncountable noun should be 'nature', 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains', and 'love to take pictures' is acceptable but 'love taking pictures' is more natural. Suggestion: keep parallel verbs in the same form (take ... and explore) or use gerund for both (taking ... and exploring); use plural for general nouns and omit 'the' with 'nature'.

× Well, I would like to take pictures in rural area because my hometown is in Narina POSIX, Bhojpur bank and I'm I I have been there for four or five years and I have seen many of seen views of river, mountains and a large and big forest. So I will I.

✓ Well, I would like to take pictures in rural areas because my hometown is Narina POSIX, Bhojpur Bank, and I have been there for four or five years. I have seen many views of rivers, mountains, and a large forest.

Errors: 'in rural area' should be plural 'in rural areas' or 'in the rural area'; 'in Narina POSIX, Bhojpur bank' needs capitalization and commas; 'have been there for four or five years' is fine but remove repeated words; 'many of seen views of river' is ungrammatical—use 'many views of rivers'; 'large and big forest' is redundant—use 'large forest'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and plural forms for general places, clean up repetitions and redundant adjectives.

× Well, in my opinion, I prefer that, uh, prefer views in my own country because in my country there is many natural beauty to explore the beauty of Nepal, such as Mustang, Kathmandu, the capital city of Nepal and many tourists come there and to explore the beauty of Nepal. Also, it is surrounded by.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer views in my own country because there is much natural beauty to explore in Nepal, such as Mustang and Kathmandu, the capital city. Many tourists come there to enjoy Nepal's beauty.

Errors: 'there is many natural beauty' has subject-verb and quantifier errors; use 'there is much natural beauty' or 'there are many natural sites'; repetition 'to explore the beauty of Nepal' and awkward clause order; incomplete sentence 'Also, it is surrounded by.' Remove fragments. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers with 'beauty' (much or a lot of), avoid repetition, and finish any clause about what 'it' is surrounded by or delete the fragment.