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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, uh, especially the sunrise and the sunset. There are many pictures in my phone and the camera, umm, which were, which are especially wonderful.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I would rather enjoy views in rural areas than urban areas because the natural view of rural areas are really attractive while the view while views in urban areas are more.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer lucid waters in large fountains in my own country. Umm. Different views of my own country attract many foreign people to visit my country.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 63.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题,减少填充词(如 uh, umm)和重复。可先给出主题句(I do / I love taking photos of landscapes),然后补充一两条具体细节(例如喜欢日出日落的颜色、拍摄地点或使用的设备),并使用连接词使表述连贯。注意避免不必要的重复(如“which were, which are”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially sunrises and sunsets. I enjoy how the warm colors change the sky, and I often capture them with my phone or a small mirrorless camera. For example, last month I photographed a vivid sunrise at the lakeside, which created beautiful reflections on the water.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并使用正确的语法。先给出明确立场(I prefer rural areas),然后用具体原因支持(如安静、自然景观、空气清新),并用连接词(because, while)对比城市景观。避免语法错误(主谓一致)和词语重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes, fresh air and wide-open spaces. While urban views can be interesting for architecture and city lights, I find the countryside more relaxing and photogenic for nature shots.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接对应问题(比较本国与外国的景观偏好),並提供具体理由。避免模糊或不相关的表述(如只谈喷泉),并减少填充词(Umm)。给出清晰观点后,用一两条具体细节支持(文化特色、熟悉感或交通便利)。

Ví dụ: I usually prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and cultural landmarks. For example, our coastal towns and historic fountains feel more meaningful to me, and it's easier to explore hidden spots I know well, whereas foreign views are exciting but less familiar.

Ngữ pháp

There be issue

× There are many pictures in my phone and the camera, umm, which were, which are especially wonderful.

There are many pictures on my phone and in my camera, which are especially wonderful.

介词 'in' 与 'on' 使用错误:表示存储在手机上常用介词是 'on',表示在相机内部或相机里可以用 'in'。此外,原句中 'which were, which are' 冗余且时态混用,保持现在时 'which are' 即可。建议:把介词改为 'on my phone and in my camera',并删除多余的 'which were'。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I would rather enjoy views in rural areas than urban areas because the natural view of rural areas are really attractive while the view while views in urban areas are more.

I would rather enjoy views in rural areas than in urban areas because the natural views of rural areas are really attractive, while the views in urban areas are not.

主谓一致和复数形式错误:'the natural view ... are' 主语为复数 'views' 时谓语应为复数 'are',但原句前半结构和后半句混乱。并且原句中有重复词 'while the view while views',语义不清。建议:把单数 'view' 改为复数 'views',并简化对比句,结尾用否定表达 'are not' 或者更具体的比较。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer lucid waters in large fountains in my own country.

I prefer the clear water in the large fountains in my own country.

形容词使用不当:'lucid' 不常用于描述水的日常口语,且名词 'waters' 在此处显得不自然。应使用常见形容词 'clear' 并用单数或不可数名词 'water' 或者具体说 'the clear water';同时在指特定喷泉时加定冠词 'the large fountains'。建议使用更自然的搭配 'clear water' 或 'clear waters'(在诗意语境),并添加定冠词使表达明确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AttractiveAppealing; Good-looking
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
LargeBig; Abundant; Wide-reaching
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
WonderfulMarvelous
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