Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two linked supporting details, and avoid filler sounds. Use specific vocabulary (e.g. landscapes, scenery, architecture) and correct basic grammar (singular/plural, article use). Aim for 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because my country has varied and beautiful scenery. For example, I often photograph coastal landscapes and mountain forests when I explore new areas, which helps me remember the trip and share it with friends.

Gợi ý: First, state your clear preference in one sentence. Then give one specific reason and an example using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and filler. Use vocabulary like "urban", "rural", "crowded", "peaceful", "coastal", and explain conditions clearly.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I enjoy walking through countryside paths and photographing fields and forests, whereas urban areas can be crowded and noisy.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and give one clear reason with a specific example. Correct grammar: use "my country has" not "I'm our country have". Keep to 2–3 sentences, use linking words like "because" and "for example", and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide range of landscapes and cultural sites. For example, I often visit nearby national parks and historic towns to photograph traditional architecture and natural scenery.

× in our country, many, many has a many beautiful place.

✓ in our country, there are many beautiful places.

The original uses incorrect agreement between quantifier and noun: 'many' requires a plural noun ('places'), and 'has' is wrong for plural. Also 'there are' is needed to state existence. Suggest using 'there are many beautiful places.'

× we have many, many different beautiful things and multiple tree and beautiful view.

✓ we have many different beautiful things, multiple trees, and beautiful views.

List items should be plural to match 'many' and 'multiple'. 'Tree' and 'view' must be plural: 'trees' and 'views'. Also add commas to separate items.

× I enjoyed a lot too, uh, explore new things and new, uh, new area and new nature.

✓ I enjoy exploring new things, new areas, and nature a lot.

The speaker mixed past tense 'enjoyed' with infinitive 'explore'. To match present habit use present tense 'enjoy' and the gerund 'exploring'. Use plural 'areas' and simplify 'new nature' to 'nature'.

× You're a little bit ocean, but sometimes I likes over areas for views and sometimes I like rural areas for views because the one nature was so so wet so we can go we can't go outside.

✓ Sometimes I prefer coastal areas, but other times I like rural areas for the views because when the weather is very wet we cannot go outside.

'You're a little bit ocean' is incorrect pronoun use and unclear; replace with 'coastal areas' or 'the coast'. 'I likes' has subject-verb error (see third person rule) and 'the one nature' is unclear; change to 'when the weather is very wet'. 'We can go we can't go' is contradictory and ungrammatical; clarify as 'we cannot go outside.'

× sometimes I likes over areas for views

✓ sometimes I like urban areas for views

The verb 'likes' is third-person singular form; with subject 'I' use 'like'. Also 'over areas' is unclear; likely meant 'urban areas' or 'other areas'. Use correct verb form and clearer noun.

× So that's that's the that's the time I.

✓ So that's the time I stay home.

Original is fragmented and incomplete. Provide a complete clause clarifying the meaning, e.g., 'that's the time I stay home' or 'that's when I cannot go out.' Adjust based on intended meaning.

× Yes, I prefer to use my own country because I'm our country have very many beautiful places and and many, many beautiful areas.

✓ Yes, I prefer to travel in my own country because my country has many beautiful places and areas.

'I prefer to use my own country' is unnatural; 'prefer to travel in my own country' fits context. 'I'm our country have' mixes pronouns and verb forms; correct to 'my country has.' Remove repeated 'many, many.'

× So that's why I prefer my car and my proper to be used in my country and explore many more new areas and and distributed all of the people and to connect.

✓ So that's why I prefer my country and like to explore many new areas and share them with people to connect.

Original contains incorrect and unclear pronouns ('my car and my proper'), and awkward passive constructions ('to be used in my country'). Rephrase to 'prefer my country' or 'prefer to travel in my country' and clarify intention: 'explore new areas and share them with people to connect.'