Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Actually I do not like taking photos. I prefer to see the stunning view by my with my own eyes rather than through the photos. MMM that's because being there can let me feel the atmosphere and some details like the light, the sound and the smell which the photo.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I previous in rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery can help me unwind my unwind myself. For example, I enjoy walking on the fields and walking along the river.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, it's really hard to say. As for me, I tend to prefer the scenery my own country, but if I stay in a in one place for very short long time, I might get tired of the scenery surroundings, the sur surrounding sceneries. Umm, so I might I, I might want.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然和连贯,注意语法和词汇准确性;避免重复填充词(如“MMM”)并修正词序和搭配错误。可按“直接回答+理由+具体细节”组织答案,使用连接词(because, for example, and)使表达更有逻辑。
Ví dụ: I don't really like taking photos; I prefer to enjoy a stunning view with my own eyes because being there lets me experience the atmosphere. For example, I can notice the changing light, hear the sounds of nature, and even smell the air, which photos can't convey.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答主体明确,但有语法和重复错误("previous"和"my unwind myself")。应用一到两句支持细节并用连接词衔接(for example, because)。用更准确的词汇描述活动和感觉。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the open landscapes and greenery help me relax. For example, I enjoy walking across fields and along rivers, which makes me feel calm and refreshed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语句不连贯,存在重复和不必要停顿。应先给出直接立场(prefer A or both),然后解释原因并给出具体情境。控制答案长度,使用流利的连接词(however, but, if)。
Ví dụ: It's hard to choose. Generally I prefer the scenery of my own country because I'm familiar with it and it feels comforting, but if I stay in the same place for a long time I might want to travel abroad for different landscapes and new experiences.
× I prefer to see the stunning view by my with my own eyes rather than through the photos.
✓ I prefer to see the stunning view with my own eyes rather than through photos.
句中多余且错误的介词短语“by my with my”造成结构混乱,正确表达应使用固定搭配“with my own eyes”表示“亲眼看到”。同时“through the photos”可简化为“through photos”。建议复习介词搭配,注意常用固定表达。
× MMM that's because being there can let me feel the atmosphere and some details like the light, the sound and the smell which the photo.
✓ That's because being there lets me feel the atmosphere and details like the light, the sound and the smell that a photo cannot.
原句存在动词形式与从句结构错误:1) 主语是“being there”,与动词应为第三人称单数,故用“lets”而不是“let”。(对应第三人称单数问题ID2/主谓一致ID27)2) “which the photo”不完整,需补全比较含义,改为“that a photo cannot”或“which a photo cannot capture”。建议注意主谓一致并确保定语从句完整。
× I previous in rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery can help me unwind my unwind myself.
✓ I prefer rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery help me unwind.
原句有单词错误“previous”应为“prefer”(词汇使用错误),且存在重复片段“unwind my unwind myself”。另外时态和语态适合一般现在时,故用“help me unwind”而不是“can help me unwind myself”。建议注意常用动词并避免赘余。
× For example, I enjoy walking on the fields and walking along the river.
✓ For example, I enjoy walking in the fields and walking along the river.
介词搭配上,“walk in the fields”比“walk on the fields”更自然;“along the river”正确。建议记忆常见固定搭配,如“in the fields/along the river”。
× Well, it's really hard to say. As for me, I tend to prefer the scenery my own country, but if I stay in a in one place for very short long time, I might get tired of the scenery surroundings, the sur surrounding sceneries. Umm, so I might I, I might want.
✓ Well, it's really hard to say. For me, I tend to prefer the scenery in my own country, but if I stay in one place for a very long time, I might get tired of the surroundings, so I might want to travel.
原句问题较多:1) 缺少介词“in”应为“scenery in my own country”。2) 冗余与矛盾短语“very short long time”应为“a very long time”或“a very short time”,根据语意选择“a very long time”。3) “scenery surroundings, the sur surrounding sceneries”重复且不自然,应简化为“the surroundings”。4) 句末“so I might I, I might want”不完整,应补全动词短语“to travel”或“to move somewhere”。建议整理句子,避免重复,使用恰当介词并完整表达意图。