Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, taking pictures is one of my favorite hobbies and different different feels like let me through the world is lovely and wonderful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like rural areas more because the rural areas have more beautiful views, but the preferred views have more technology and not very good to take a photo of it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because I live in this country every year, but in other country I can feel different and let me feel very comfortable.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、准确并避免重复。先用一句话直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体说明为什么喜欢拍不同的风景,给出具体例子或感受,并注意语法和词汇的准确性。可以把“different different”改为具体描述(比如 “different places” 或 “various scenes”)并修正句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different scenes. Photography lets me capture the beauty of places I visit, from quiet countryside fields to bustling city streets, and it helps me remember the feelings I had at that moment.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰的对比并用连词连接论点。先直接表明偏好,然后给出两到三个具体理由和例子,避免模糊或矛盾的表述(如“preferred views have more technology” 不明确)。用 because / whereas / however 等连接词使逻辑更清楚。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they usually offer natural landscapes like hills, rivers and open fields that are very photogenic. Urban areas can be interesting too, but the heavy traffic and modern buildings sometimes make it harder to find peaceful, picturesque scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并提供具体原因或对比。先明确偏好,然后说明为什么国外景色更吸引你,给出具体体验或例子(例如文化差异、风景风格或氛围)。避免字面直译式表达如“feel different”。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer new landscapes and cultural sights that I don't see at home. For example, visiting coastal towns abroad introduced me to unique architecture and local lifestyles, which felt refreshing and relaxing.
× Yes, of course, taking pictures is one of my favorite hobbies and different different feels like let me through the world is lovely and wonderful.
✓ Yes, of course. Taking pictures is one of my favorite hobbies, and different views make me feel like traveling through the world; it is lovely and wonderful.
原句中存在多处问题: 1) 重复“different different”是笔误,应改为“different views”。 2) 结构“feels like let me through the world”错误,动词形式和结构不正确。应使用“make me feel like + 动名词”,例如“make me feel like traveling through the world”。 3) 将句子拆分并用恰当的连词与标点,能使表达更清晰。建议使用动名词(-ing)结构表达“让我感觉到……”。 改进建议:写句子时注意主语和谓语的一致,使用“make/let sb + do”或“make sb feel like + -ing”的固定表达,检查是否有重复词。
× I like rural areas more because the rural areas have more beautiful views, but the preferred views have more technology and not very good to take a photo of it.
✓ I prefer rural areas because they have more beautiful views, but urban scenes have more technology and are not very good for taking photos.
原句错误包括: 1) 不必要的重复“the rural areas”;可直接用复数代词“they”。 2) “the preferred views have more technology”表意不明,推断想说“城市景观(urban scenes)科技感更强”,应用复数名词搭配。 3) “not very good to take a photo of it”中存在代词单复数和不定式搭配错误,应改为“are not very good for taking photos”,同时避免单数代词“it”。 改进建议:注意单复数一致(areas→they,scenes复数),使用固定搭配“good for doing sth”而不是“good to do sth”在此语境更自然。
× I prefer views in other countries because I live in this country every year, but in other country I can feel different and let me feel very comfortable.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because I live in this country every year, but in other countries I can experience different cultures and feel very comfortable.
原句问题: 1) “I live in this country every year”语义模糊且时态搭配不自然,若意思是“我每年都住在这个国家”,建议改为“I live in this country every year”可改为更自然的表达或说明频率。若想表达“我一年到头住在这个国家”,应为“I live in this country year-round”。 2) “in other country”缺复数,应为“in other countries”。 3) “I can feel different and let me feel very comfortable”语法错误,不能用“let me”接在此处,应使用“make me feel”或直接用“feel”。将“feel different”改为更具体的“experience different cultures”更清晰。 改进建议:注意时态与频率副词的搭配(every year, year-round等),保持单复数一致,使用自然的动词短语如“make me feel comfortable”或“feel comfortable”。