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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Of course, I like taking pictures for mountains and buildings.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Well, I will say Apple areas 'cause I was child. I like buildings.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I think this question is wrong. No best country view, just only best view.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且短,但表达有语法和用词问题,且信息较少。请用更自然的句子开头并补充一两条具体细节,使用连接词使回答更连贯。例如说明你拍摄这些景色的原因或拍照的场合。注意介词用法(take pictures of)和冠词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of mountains and buildings because they have interesting shapes and textures. For example, I like photographing modern skyscrapers for their reflective surfaces, and mountain landscapes during sunrise for the colours they create.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且有词汇错误('Apple areas'、时态问题),句子结构混乱。请直接给出偏好的主题句,然后用一到两句具体解释原因,并使用连接词(because, so, therefore)。保持句子简洁并纠正词汇和时态。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because I grew up in the city and enjoy the architecture. For example, I like walking around downtown to photograph old buildings and modern towers, as they offer a variety of shapes and details.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答显得生硬且有否定考官问题的倾向,语法和表达不自然。建议先直接回答问题(例如说明两者各有优点),然后给出原因和具体例子,使用连接词(however, although, because)使论述更有逻辑。避免争论考官问题。

Ví dụ: I don't think one country has the best views; both my country and others have beautiful sights. For instance, local coastal scenes are familiar and peaceful, whereas foreign cities offer unique architectural styles, so I enjoy photographing both.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Of course, I like taking pictures for mountains and buildings.

Of course, I like taking pictures of mountains and buildings.

介词使用错误。英语中常用 take a picture of sth 表示“拍……的照片”,而不是 take a picture for。建议记住固定搭配“take pictures of + 名词/名词短语”。

Verb tense / Sentence structure errors

× Well, I will say Apple areas 'cause I was child. I like buildings.

Well, I would say urban areas because I was a child. I like buildings.

存在多个问题: 1) “Apple areas” 显然是拼写或词不达意,应为“urban areas”(城市地区)。 2) 时态和语气:在此回答偏好时,用 would say 比 will say 更礼貌、自然;will 在此处不合适(Grammar Problem Type 7 不完全匹配,但主要是句子结构和时态/语气问题),按要求只修正列出的类型,这里归入句子结构/时态错误。 3) 缺少冠词:’cause I was child 应为 because I was a child,child 前需不定冠词 a。 建议:检查单词拼写,使用固定表达“would say”,并注意名词前需要冠词时加上 a/an。

Sentence structure errors

× I think this question is wrong. No best country view, just only best view.

I don't think this question is appropriate. There is no best country view, only the best view.

句子结构和表达不自然: 1) “I think this question is wrong” 在口语中更自然的表达是“I don't think this question is appropriate”或“I don't think this question is fair”。 2) “No best country view, just only best view” 缺少谓语和冠词,应改为“There is no best country view, only the best view”或更自然地“No country has the best view; there are great views everywhere.” 建议:注意完整句子需要主语和谓语,使用合适的连词和冠词,使表达更清晰自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
WrongInappropriate; Illegal; Amiss; Immorality; Misdeed
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