Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp cơ bản để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; rút gọn câu, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Ví dụ: tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "more", "taking"), sửa cấu trúc như "It makes me feel relaxed" thay vì "we made me feel more soothing". Giữ không quá 4-5 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản (e.g., "because", "such as").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it relaxes me. For example, I often take photos of sunsets on the beach, which have beautiful colours and peaceful moods. I usually use my phone and try to capture the light and reflections.

Gợi ý: Tập trung vào một ý chính rõ ràng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, đại từ. Dùng liên từ để so sánh hợp lý (e.g., "however", "while"). Bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể hoặc ví dụ ngắn để minh họa tại sao bạn thích vùng nông thôn (ví dụ: âm thanh, cảnh vật, hoạt động).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the fresh air and natural landscapes help me relax. For example, I like walking along quiet country paths and listening to birds, which is very calming. Urban areas, while convenient and modern, are often noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh: tránh lặp từ, chia động từ đúng, và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do. Nên nói rõ cảm xúc và kế hoạch tương lai. Ví dụ: "I have never visited other countries, but I hope to travel abroad to see different landscapes". Giữ câu ngắn và mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I haven't visited other countries yet, so I usually see their views on television. However, I find them exciting and hope to travel abroad in the future to experience different cultures and landscapes in person.

× Yes, definitely. I'm really attracted to more various views and we made me feel more soothing something shooting for example, I really like taking more taking photos, the sunset or the on the beach or.

✓ Yes, definitely. I am really attracted to a variety of views because they make me feel calm. For example, I really like taking photos of the sunset or on the beach.

Error type: sentence structure and word choice. The original sentence has incorrect word order, unnecessary words (more, we made me), and awkward phrases (soothing something shooting, taking more taking photos). Suggestion: use clear noun phrases ('a variety of views'), correct verb forms ('make me feel calm'), and concise examples ('taking photos of the sunset' or 'taking photos on the beach'). Note: sửa các từ dư thừa, sắp xếp lại trật tự từ và dùng cụm từ chuẩn để câu rõ nghĩa hơn.

× I prefer rural views because the fresh air and natural landscape make me feel relaxed and beautiful.

✓ I prefer rural views because the fresh air and the natural landscape make me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Error type: article use and word choice. 'Natural landscape' is countable in this context and 'the natural landscape' is better. 'Beautiful' is not the right adjective for feeling; use 'peaceful' or 'calm'. Suggestion: include definite article 'the' for a specific natural setting and choose adjectives that describe feelings. Note: thêm mạo từ 'the' trước cụm danh từ chỉ phong cảnh cụ thể và dùng tính từ phù hợp với cảm xúc.

× On the other hand, urban areas have more modern facilities and high rise buildings.

✓ On the other hand, urban areas have more modern facilities and high-rise buildings.

Error type: word formation. 'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective before 'buildings'. Suggestion: use hyphen for compound adjectives and keep parallel structure. Note: dùng dấu nối trong tính từ ghép trước danh từ (high-rise).

× We are convenient and modern, but often noisy and crowds.

✓ They are convenient and modern, but often noisy and crowded.

Error type: incorrect pronoun and word form. 'We' incorrectly refers to urban areas; use 'they' or repeat 'urban areas'. 'Crowds' is a noun; the intended adjective is 'crowded'. Suggestion: use correct pronoun to refer to places and use adjective 'crowded' to describe noise and crowding. Note: sửa đại từ tham chiếu và dùng dạng tính từ 'crowded' thay cho danh từ 'crowds'.

× I I have never tried to visit another countries so I just watch it on the on the television, but I find it quite exciting and I hope in the future I have a opportunity to visit and enjoy the.

✓ I have never tried visiting other countries, so I just watch them on television. I find it quite exciting and I hope to have an opportunity to visit and enjoy them in the future.

Error type: article use, verb form, pronoun agreement and sentence completeness. 'Another countries' is wrong: use 'other countries' (plural) or 'another country' (singular). 'Tried to visit' can be 'tried visiting' or 'tried to visit' but 'have never visited other countries' is more natural. 'Watch it on the on the television' has wrong pronoun and repetition; use 'watch them on television'. 'I have a opportunity' needs 'an opportunity' and the final clause was incomplete; correct to 'hope to have an opportunity to visit and enjoy them in the future.' Suggestion: correct article 'an', use plural pronoun agreement, remove repetition, and complete the final phrase. Note: sửa mạo từ 'an', số nhiều/ít và làm rõ đối tượng thay thế bằng đại từ phù hợp.