Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant or confusing phrasing, correct word choice, and keep within 2–4 sentences. Use linking words to add one or two specific reasons or examples. Also correct vocabulary errors (e.g., 'resentful' is wrong here) and simplify structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph scenery when I travel or even near my home because I like to preserve memories. For example, last month I took photos of a mountain lake to remember a peaceful family picnic.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., singular/plural agreement, articles) and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences with precise vocabulary like 'tranquil' or 'countryside'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside is more peaceful and has cleaner air. For example, I enjoy scenes with small villages and lakes, which feel tranquil and relaxing compared with busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear reason and a specific example. Improve grammar and conciseness (avoid repeating 'related'). Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to structure the response. Mention a specific cultural feature to be more vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they are closely connected to traditional culture. For example, in my hometown I often see historic temples and houses used for cultural ceremonies, which makes those views special to me.

× Here's Azam person who lives to travel.

✓ I'm Azam, a person who loves to travel.

Pronoun and sentence structure: 'Here's' is used to present an object or person physically and is not appropriate for introducing oneself. 'Person who lives to travel' is ungrammatical; 'lives to travel' is awkward for meaning 'loves to travel.' Use 'I'm Azam' plus a relative clause 'a person who loves to travel' to make a natural self-introduction. Suggestion: use 'I'm' for introductions and 'love' rather than 'live' for preference expressions.

× So whenever I travel or even at home, I always take the photographs of the beautiful scenery or the picturesque landscape when I go outside as I love to keep it as a memory when so that I can watch it and it reminds me all the beautiful moments and makes me resentful.

✓ Whenever I travel, or even at home, I always take photographs of beautiful scenery because I like to keep them as memories so I can look at them and remember all the beautiful moments.

This sentence has multiple structural and word-choice errors: redundant conjunctions ('when so that'), incorrect article use ('the photographs of the beautiful scenery' -> 'photographs of beautiful scenery'), wrong verb 'watch' for photos (use 'look at' or 'view'), and incorrect word 'resentful' (means feeling bitterness; the intended meaning is 'feel nostalgic' or 'remember fondly'). Also overly long and run-on. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, remove unnecessary articles, and use correct verbs and adjectives ('remember' or 'feel nostalgic').

× Honestly speaking, I like the beautiful scene in the rural areas as they are away from the hush or the city life.

✓ Honestly, I prefer scenes in rural areas because they are away from the noise of city life.

Use of 'hush' is incorrect; 'noise' or 'hustle and bustle' is appropriate. 'Beautiful scene' should be plural 'scenes' or uncountable 'scenery'. 'Honestly speaking' is wordy; 'Honestly' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for choices, 'scenery' or 'scenes', and idiomatic expressions like 'noise' or 'the hustle and bustle.'

× It provides a beautiful peaceful environment, fresh air.

✓ They provide a peaceful environment and fresh air.

Subject mismatch and article use: 'It' does not agree with 'rural areas' (plural). Use 'they' or rephrase 'Rural areas provide...'. Also comma splice: combine items with 'and.' Suggestion: match subject number with verb and list attributes properly.

× So I prefer that views which have a beautiful villages and a lake at the site.

✓ So I prefer views that include beautiful villages and a lake.

Pronoun and determiner errors: 'that views' mixes demonstrative and noun form; use 'views that' or 'the views that.' 'A beautiful villages' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'villages.' 'At the site' is unnatural; 'on site' is odd here—better 'include' or 'with.' Suggestion: ensure determiners match noun number and use clearer verbs like 'include.'

× I like the views in my country itself as I live in India and it is very related to the traditional cultures and views.

✓ I like the views in my own country because I live in India and they are closely related to traditional culture.

Pronoun and agreement: 'my country itself' is awkward; 'my own country' is natural. 'It is very related to the traditional cultures and views' uses singular 'it' for 'views' and unclear phrase 'related to the traditional cultures and views.' Use plural 'they' for 'views' and 'traditional culture' as an uncountable concept. Suggestion: use consistent number agreement and clearer collocations ('related to traditional culture').

× Everything near me in my hometown it's related to the traditional ceremonies or the architecture is related to the ancient cultures.

✓ Everything in my hometown is related to traditional ceremonies, and the architecture reflects ancient cultures.

This sentence has a redundant pronoun and contraction 'it's' causing a run-on and awkward structure. Use a single main verb 'is' for the subject 'Everything' and split into two coordinated clauses for clarity. 'Ancient cultures' is fine, but 'the architecture is related to the ancient cultures' is wordy; 'reflects' is clearer. Suggestion: avoid contractions that break sentence flow and use active verbs like 'reflect' for clarity.