Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like it taking picture of different views. I'm enjoying viewing different beautiful views in my daily life.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I prefer open areas more than rural areas, because in urban area we can see some modern buildings, we can see some international exhibition.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer using my own country because I fully love my own country and China is a very big country that there is so many various obvious that which is very beautiful.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,避免语法错误和冗余。可以用一句主题句回答喜欢与否,然后补充一到两句具体细节(比如拍摄什么景物、什么时候拍、用什么设备或感受)。注意语法:使用正确的动词形式(like taking pictures / I enjoy)。整段不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes when I walk around my neighborhood because I like capturing light and color. I usually use my phone and try to find interesting angles to make the shots more memorable.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,逻辑混乱(open areas vs rural areas; urban vs rural confused)。先明确偏好(城市或农村),然后给出两到三个具体理由并用连词连接,避免重复。注意数与冠词(in urban areas / in my country’s cities)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and vibrant streets. For example, city skylines and public squares often have interesting buildings and events, and there are more photo opportunities like exhibitions and street life.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 表达含混且有多处语法错误与词汇使用不当。先直接回答偏好,然后给出具体原因和例子(比如多样的风景、文化特色或具体地点)。避免无意义重复,用简洁句子并控制在五句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I love its diversity. China has a wide range of landscapes, from mountains and rivers to modern cities, so I can find very different scenery without traveling far. For instance, I enjoy photographing the karst peaks in Guilin and the futuristic skyline in Shanghai.
× Yes, I like it taking picture of different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
句子中不需要多餘的代詞 it,並且 picture 應使用複數形式表示一般性喜好。正確結構為 like + 動名詞(taking)。建議:去掉 it,將 picture 改為複數 pictures。
× I'm enjoying viewing different beautiful views in my daily life.
✓ I enjoy viewing different beautiful views in my daily life.
此處表達習慣性或常態動作,應使用一般現在時(I enjoy),而不是現在進行時(I'm enjoying)。建議:用 I enjoy 表示常態,而非進行式。
× In my opinion, I prefer open areas more than rural areas, because in urban area we can see some modern buildings, we can see some international exhibition.
✓ In my opinion, I prefer urban areas to rural areas, because in urban areas we can see modern buildings and international exhibitions.
錯誤點包括介詞與比較結構:應使用 prefer A to B。地點名詞 area 作為可數名詞需用複數(urban areas)或加定冠詞 the urban area。並且 exhibition 應為複數 exhibitions 才能與一些 modern buildings 對應;句中重複 we can see 可合併為一個並列結構。建議:使用 prefer A to B,注意名詞複數形式與一致。
× I prefer using my own country because I fully love my own country and China is a very big country that there is so many various obvious that which is very beautiful.
✓ I prefer my own country because I truly love it, and China is a very large country with many beautiful and diverse sights.
原句中 prefer 後不需要使用動名詞 using,直接用名詞短語 my own country。重複表達(my own country)與代詞使用不當,應用 it 代替前文名詞。句子後半語序混亂,使用 that there is so many various obvious which 非常不正確。應改為 with + 名詞短語來描述特徵(with many beautiful and diverse sights)。建議:不用 prefer using,使用代詞 it 代替重複名詞,並用簡潔的名詞短語描述特徵。