Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g., "everyday", "some places photos"). Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it relaxes me and helps me capture memories. For example, I often photograph parks and natural scenes when I go for a walk, and I share the best shots with my friends online.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clarify your preference, then explain reasons using linking words. Correct grammar ("both of them", "every place has", "take photos outside/indoors"). Be specific about what you like in each setting and how weather affects your choices.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For instance, in the city I like the dynamic architecture and street scenes, while in the countryside I prefer peaceful landscapes. Also, I usually photograph outdoors in the rain to capture dramatic reflections, but on sunny days I shoot indoors to avoid harsh shadows.

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatically correct. State your general preference and give a specific reason with linking words ("because", "so"). Avoid unclear phrases like "my photos full of abroad places". Use vocabulary like "abroad", "new places", "first time" properly.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer photographing views abroad because visiting a place for the first time makes me curious and eager to capture everything. For example, when I travel abroad I focus on local landmarks and street scenes to document the new culture and atmosphere.

× Definitely yes, and also I think it is my favorite habit in everyone day because I love to take some places photos such as parks or such as something about nature.

✓ Definitely, yes. I think it is my favorite habit every day because I love to take photos of places such as parks or other natural scenes.

Original sentence used 'everyone day' incorrectly; correct phrase is 'every day' (quantifier/time expression). 'some places photos' and 'such as something about nature' are awkward and ungrammatical; use 'take photos of places' and 'other natural scenes'. Also add commas and split into two sentences for clarity.

× So I I like I would like to take my photo from outside and also share that.

✓ So I would like to take photos outdoors and also share them.

Repeated fillers 'I I like' removed. 'take my photo from outside' misuses pronoun and preposition; 'photos outdoors' is natural. 'share that' should use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to photos.

× Actually I love to both of them because I think every places has a different aura for that.

✓ Actually I love both because I think every place has a different aura.

'to both of them' is incorrect usage; use 'love both'. 'every places' mixes 'every' with plural; 'every' requires singular noun 'place'. Removed unnecessary phrase 'for that'.

× So in rainy weather I prefer to take my photo in outside.

✓ So in rainy weather I prefer to take photos outside.

Use 'outside' without 'in' (preposition error). 'take my photo' changed to plural 'take photos' for naturalness and consistency.

× In sunny weather I prefer to take my photo inside because it is in impact on my photos quality.

✓ In sunny weather I prefer to take photos inside because it has an impact on the quality of my photos.

Original 'it is in impact on my photos quality' misuses prepositions and word order. Correct phrase is 'has an impact on the quality of my photos'. Also pluralized 'photos' and smoothed wording.

× Actually it depends on two places.

✓ Actually it depends on the two places.

When referring to two specific items, include 'the' before 'two places' (incorrect preposition/article usage). Alternatively 'depends on the place' or 'depends on both places' could be used depending on meaning.

× However, generally I love to take my photos in abroad because in there I been there in first time, so I feel more curious about my country.

✓ However, generally I love to take my photos abroad because when I am there for the first time I feel more curious about that country.

Do not use 'in abroad'; correct is 'abroad' without 'in'. 'in there I been there in first time' has multiple tense and pronoun errors: use 'when I am there for the first time' or 'when I visit for the first time'. 'feel more curious about my country' likely meant 'that country' to contrast with own country.

× That makes that that I want to say that in abroad my photos full of abroad places.

✓ That makes me want to say that abroad my photos are full of images of different places.

Original contains repeated 'that that' (discourse error) and incorrect adjective use 'my photos full of abroad places'—need verb 'are' and better noun phrase 'images of different places'. Also remove 'in' before 'abroad'.