Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like use pictures to record some beautiful things, beautiful views and beautiful people. I want to.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I pray for views in rural areas on, you know, the things in urban various years. Very common for me. So I want to see some different views I like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
It's hard to say. Different countries have different views and you know, China is very big. I still still many areas I have not to see. It's really hard to say.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,先用一句主句表明态度,然后用1–2句具体说明原因或举例,避免语法错误和冗余。注意时态和动词搭配(例如:"use pictures" 应为 "to use pictures" 或更自然的 "to take photos")。句子总数不超过5句。可加入连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like to take photos to record beautiful scenes and people because photos help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and portraits of friends when we travel.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏结构和清晰度,需要先直接表明偏好(城市或乡村),然后给出具体原因并用连接词组织句子。避免口语填充词(如 "you know")和不正确的词语(如 "pray for")。保持句子简短且语法正确。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and natural scenery. Rural areas offer quieter environments and more opportunities to photograph nature, such as fields and rivers, compared with busy cities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够具体且有重复和语法错误。应先给出明确立场或说明无法选择的理由,然后提供具体细节或例子来支持观点。避免重复词汇(如 "still still")和非标准表达(如 "have not to see")。使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: It's difficult to choose because both have unique views. China has vast and diverse landscapes I haven't seen yet, but I also enjoy exploring scenery abroad for different cultural perspectives, so I like both depending on the destination.
× Yes, I like use pictures to record some beautiful things, beautiful views and beautiful people. I want to.
✓ Yes, I like to use pictures to record beautiful things, views, and people. I want to.
错误类型:动词结构/句子结构错误。问题在于动词短语缺少不定式“to”。在英语中,动词like后面通常用不定式(like to do)或动名词(like doing)。此外,列举时不需要重复形容词“beautiful”。建议:在like之后加to use,合并并简化并列项。
× I pray for views in rural areas on, you know, the things in urban various years. Very common for me. So I want to see some different views I like.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban ones because urban views are very common to me. So I want to see different kinds of views.
错误类型:句子结构混乱与词语使用不当。原句中使用了不合适的动词pray(祈祷)和不自然的短语“on, you know, the things in urban various years”,导致意思不清。建议:用prefer表明偏好,用prefer... to...比较乡村与城市;用because解释原因,并用different kinds of views表达“想看不同的景色”。
× It's hard to say. Different countries have different views and you know, China is very big. I still still many areas I have not to see. It's really hard to say.
✓ It's hard to say. Different countries have different views, and China is very big. There are still many areas I have not seen. It's really hard to say.
错误类型:句子结构与动词时态使用错误。原句中“still still”重复,且短语“I have not to see”不正确,应使用现在完成时的被动/完成结构来表示到目前为止还没看过:I have not seen. 建议:删除重复词,使用连词and连接句子,使用现在完成时表述未曾去过的经历(I have not seen / I have not visited)。