Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (for example, because/so). Keep responses under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't take many photos. I usually forget my camera and prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes because it feels more relaxing and less distracting.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference or say you like both, then support with specific reasons and linking words (for example, because/while). Reduce repetition and fillers, and use precise vocabulary (skyline, bustling, illuminated).

Ví dụ: I like both, but I especially enjoy urban views because the skyline and illuminated streets feel lively at night. In contrast, rural views are peaceful and full of natural scenery, which I appreciate on quiet weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, structured response: topic sentence + two specific supporting points connected with linking words (for example, because/and). Reduce hesitation and avoid repeating phrases. Mention a brief example to make it specific.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. At home I love familiar landscapes and local wildlife, while traveling I enjoy discovering new scenery and sharing photos with friends to remember the trip.

× Uh, no, I'm not really interested in taking photos.

✓ Uh, no, I'm not really interested in taking photos.

No grammatical error from the provided list; sentence is correct.

× Uh, I usually forget uh, to take photo when I'm out.

✓ Uh, I usually forget to take photos when I'm out.

Singular/plural issue: 'photo' should be plural 'photos' because it refers generally to taking pictures on outings. Use plural when speaking about non-countable repeated actions or multiple items.

× I just uh, enjoy uh, looking to the views with my eyes.

✓ I just enjoy looking at the views with my eyes.

Incorrect verb-preposition combination and present tense usage: English uses 'look at' not 'look to' when observing views. Also unnecessary filler 'uh' removed for clarity; present simple 'enjoy' is correct.

× Uh, both of them have, uh, their own, uh, unique nature, uh, their, uh, own unique views, uh, for urban theirs, I loved looking to the sky, uh, lines, uh, specially at night with lights.

✓ Both have their own unique features and views. In urban areas, I love looking at the skyline, especially at night with the lights.

Run-on and sentence structure errors: original is disfluent and unclear. 'Both of them' can be simplified to 'Both'. 'Unique nature' and 'unique views' are repetitive; 'features and views' is clearer. 'For urban theirs' is ungrammatical; use 'In urban areas'. Use 'love' (present simple) for preference, not past 'loved'. 'Look at the skyline' is correct preposition and noun; 'specially' corrected to 'especially'.

× Uh, there is always something happening, uh, in there.

✓ There is always something happening there.

Preposition error: 'in there' is unnecessary here; 'there' alone is more natural when referring to a place previously mentioned.

× Both of them, I loved both of them, uh, I love uh, the nature in my countries and I love to explore more at other countries, uh, taking photos, uh, sharing them with uh, my, uh, friends online like this.

✓ I love both. I love the nature in my country, and I like exploring other countries, taking photos and sharing them with my friends online.

Multiple tense and number problems: 'loved' (past) conflicts with present preference—use present 'love' or 'like'. 'My countries' should be singular 'my country' unless speaker has multiple home countries. 'Explore more at other countries' incorrect preposition—use 'exploring other countries'. Also streamline gerund phrases: 'taking photos and sharing them with my friends online' is natural.