Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、表現がやや冗長で文法と語順の改善が必要です。まずトピック文で簡潔に答え、その後1〜2文で具体例や理由を述べてください。接続詞（because, so, for example）を使い、代名詞や冠詞の使い方に注意しましょう（e.g. “the pictures”ではなく“them”や“the photos”など）。発音の流暢さを高めるために短く自然な文を繰り返し練習してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photos help me preserve memories. For example, I often take pictures at local festivals or parks so I can remember how they felt afterwards.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、語彙や文法の誤りが多く、繰り返しが目立ちます。まず主語＋意見の構造（I prefer...）で始め、なぜそう思うかを明確に述べてください。'nature'は不可算名詞なので複数形にしないこと、'a lot of nature'や 'lots of natural scenery' のように表現を直しましょう。また、'refresh my mind' や 'feel relaxed' といった慣用表現を正確に使ってください。接続詞（because, and）で文をつなぎ、1〜2具体例を追加すると良いです。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the natural scenery is calming and helps me relax. For example, walking in the countryside clears my mind more than a busy city street.

Gợi ý: 回答は体験を交えていて良いですが、文法ミスと語順、語彙選択の誤りが多く理解を妨げています。まず 'I prefer views in other countries' のように自然な表現で始め、過去の体験を話すときは過去形と適切な冠詞（e.g. 'I visited Thailand'、'I saw the sunset on the beach'）を使いましょう。'the best sunset I have ever seen' の現在完了形も自然です。最後に理由を簡潔にまとめてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For example, I visited Thailand and saw a stunning sunset on the beach, which was the best sunset I have ever seen, so I like exploring views abroad.

× Yes, I love taking pictures because taking pictures can leave memories and I can look the pictures after the event or something.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures because they can preserve memories and I can look at the pictures after the event.

The phrase 'taking pictures can leave memories' uses an incorrect verb and structure; use 'preserve memories' or 'create memories'. Also 'look the pictures' is missing the preposition 'at'. Replace the repeated noun phrase 'taking pictures' with the pronoun 'they' to avoid repetition; use 'preserve' for clear meaning and 'look at' as the correct verb-preposition combination. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer countryside sceneries because there are a lot of natures and I can feel relaxed and like fresh my mind or something.

✓ I prefer countryside scenery because there is a lot of nature and I can feel relaxed and refresh my mind.

'Countryside sceneries' is awkward; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun. 'Natures' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable. Use 'there is a lot of nature' (singular/uninflected) and 'refresh my mind' instead of 'like fresh my mind'. Also use 'feel relaxed' and 'refresh my mind' to express the intended ideas. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× And also I love nature so I prefer countryside.

✓ I also love nature, so I prefer the countryside.

Beginning a sentence with 'And also' is informal and redundant; use 'I also' instead. 'Countryside' here needs the definite article 'the' to refer to the rural environment in general. Add a comma before 'so' to join the two clauses correctly. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× I prefer another country sceneries because I I visited the Thailand and the I sold the sunset on beach and that was the best sunset I ever seen.

✓ I prefer scenery in other countries because I visited Thailand and saw the sunset on the beach; it was the best sunset I have ever seen.

Multiple errors: 'another country sceneries' should be 'scenery in other countries' (count/phrase correction). Remove duplicate 'I'. 'the Thailand' is incorrect; country names usually have no article: 'Thailand'. 'I sold the sunset' is wrong verb; should be 'saw the sunset'. 'on beach' needs the article 'the beach'. 'I ever seen' requires perfect auxiliary: 'I have ever seen'. Also use semicolon or conjunction to join related ideas and correct tense for experience. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So I prefer all another country views.

✓ So I prefer views from other countries.

'All another country views' is ungrammatical. Use 'views from other countries' or 'views of other countries'. 'Another' with 'all' is incorrect; 'other' is appropriate for plural 'countries'. Grammar problem type ID: 1