Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct common errors (e.g., 'taking picture' → 'taking pictures', 'memorize me' → 'remind me').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel to a beautiful place I take photos to remember the scenery and the atmosphere, and later I can share those memories with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar (singular/plural and verb forms) and avoid vague phrases like 'another beauty.'

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural landscapes and tranquility. For instance, the green fields, forests, and open skies are more relaxing than busy city streets, so I find rural scenery more appealing.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer, then give specific examples and a brief reason. Improve accuracy of place names and grammar, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid overly long convoluted sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country. For example, Bangladesh has beautiful places like the Sundarbans and Cox's Bazar, which offer unique natural scenery, so I usually choose to explore my country's landscapes first.

× Yes, I like taking picture because when I am going to another place and that place is beautiful then I like to taking picture because picture memorize me where I go to and where is places beauties.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures because when I go to another place and it is beautiful, I like taking pictures because pictures remind me where I have been and what the beautiful places are.

Multiple errors involve verb + -ing usage and related forms: 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' and 'taking pictures'; 'I am going to another place' should be simple present 'I go' to match the habitual meaning; 'I like to taking picture' mixes infinitive and -ing, so use 'I like taking pictures'; 'picture memorize me' uses incorrect verb and object order: 'pictures remind me' is correct; 'where I go to and where is places beauties' is ungrammatical — use 'where I have been and what the beautiful places are'. Suggestions: use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally, use 'like + -ing' for habitual likes, use 'remind' for cause/effect of memory, and use correct clause order for indirect questions.'},{