Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), and add a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use natural phrasing such as “photos” and “remind me.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they remind me of places I’ve visited. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes to capture the colours and atmosphere, so I can look back on those memories later.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use correct grammar (singular/plural, pronouns), and add a specific reason with a linking word. Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid vague words like “better.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I love natural scenery. For instance, the quiet fields and forests feel peaceful and usually have more colourful plants and wildlife than busy cities.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear answer, correct proper nouns and grammar, and give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like “for example” to make your point coherent and avoid long run-on sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, Bangladesh, because it has many beautiful natural sites. For example, places like the Sundarbans and Cox’s Bazar offer unique landscapes and wildlife, so I usually choose to visit them rather than travel abroad.

× Yes, I like taking picture because when I am going to another place and that place is beautiful then I like to taking picture because picture memorize me where I go to and where is places beauties.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures because when I go to another place and that place is beautiful, I like to take pictures because pictures remind me where I have been and where the beautiful places are.

Errors: incorrect use of -ing after 'to' (should be base verb 'take' after 'like to'); 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' after 'taking' and when talking generally; 'I am going to' unnecessary progressive for habitual/conditional meaning, use simple present 'I go'; 'memorize me' is incorrect verb and object order, use 'remind me'; 'where I go to' should be 'where I have been' or 'where I went' for past visits; 'where is places beauties' incorrect word order and form, use 'where the beautiful places are'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (take/taking) depending on pattern, use plural for countable nouns when general, use 'remind' for memory context, and maintain natural word order.

× I prefer rural areas because rural area is better than urban areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because rural areas are better than urban areas.

Error: singular 'rural area' mismatches plural 'rural areas' used elsewhere; subject and verb agreement require plural noun and plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: keep number consistent and use plural when comparing general categories: 'rural areas are better'.

× Rural area has another beauty, natural beauty.

✓ Rural areas have a different kind of beauty, a natural beauty.

Errors: 'Rural area has' uses singular—should be plural 'rural areas have' for general statement; 'another beauty' is unnatural, better 'a different kind of beauty'; repetition 'natural beauty' can be appositive and needs article 'a'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'a different kind of beauty' and ensure noun number and articles match.

× They looks very pretty and I like them.

✓ They look very pretty and I like them.

Error: subject 'They' requires verb 'look' (plural) not 'looks' (singular). Suggestion: match verb form to the pronoun: use 'look' with 'they'.

× That's why I prefer you always rural area.

✓ That's why I always prefer rural areas.

Errors: 'I prefer you always rural area' is ungrammatical and misuses pronoun 'you'; intended meaning is 'I always prefer rural areas'. Suggestion: remove 'you', place adverb 'always' before verb or after subject, and use plural noun for general preference.

× First of all my country name is Bangladesh and Bangladesh has a lot of tourist place they are Sunderbone, Sajak, Cox Bazaar and I also like this place that's why I always prefer in my country because my country is beautiful and everyone my country calls them to mother of nature.

✓ First of all, my country's name is Bangladesh. Bangladesh has a lot of tourist places such as the Sundarbans, Sajek, and Cox's Bazar, and I also like these places. That's why I always prefer my country because it is beautiful and people call it the 'mother of nature'.

Multiple errors: missing possessive 'country's name'; 'tourist place' should be plural 'tourist places'; need 'such as' to list examples; correct place names: 'Sundarbans', 'Sajek', 'Cox's Bazar'; 'this place' should be 'these places' to match plural; 'prefer in my country' should be 'prefer my country' or 'prefer to be in my country'; 'everyone my country calls them to mother of nature' is ungrammatical—correct: 'people call it the mother of nature' (use 'it' for the country, proper article and phrase). Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter ones, use possessives, plural forms for lists, correct place names, and use natural English expressions like 'people call it the mother of nature'.