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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes I do because I am trying to save lots of different memories of the views and I prepare to take picture of ocean or nature view.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer rural areas actually, because I am fascinating about ocean or tree or mountains, because it can, because I will feel feel relaxed when I join this place.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Absolutely other countries because I am living in very busy business style city. It is new happy city and but I really fascinating about natural countries.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然和简洁,注意句子结构和时态。可以直接回答并用一到两句具体原因或例子支持,避免重复(如“views”重复多次)和错误搭配(如“prepare to take picture”)。同时注意冠词和复数形式,如“a lot of memories”或“many memories”,以及“take pictures of the ocean or natural scenery”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes because it helps me keep memories of places I visit. For example, I often take pictures of the ocean and mountains when I travel to the coast.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更符合语法并避免重复。用正确的形容词和动词(例如“fascinated by”而非“fascinating about”),将原因组织成一到两句并使用连接词(because, so, which makes me)使表达连贯。注意不要重复词语(如“because”多次)和多余词(如“双重feel”)。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I’m fascinated by natural landscapes. They make me feel relaxed and peaceful, especially when I see trees, mountains or the sea.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 需要更清晰表达比较并修正用词问题。用完整句子说明原因,避免直译错误(如“business style city”不自然)和词形错误(应为“fascinated by natural scenery/countryside”)。可以给出具体对比细节,例如城市的繁忙与国外自然景观的宁静。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I live in a very busy city where there is little nature. In contrast, I enjoy the peaceful countryside and diverse natural scenery I see when I travel abroad.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I do because I am trying to save lots of different memories of the views and I prepare to take picture of ocean or nature view.

Yes, I do, because I try to keep many different memories of scenes, and I plan to take pictures of the ocean or natural landscapes.

句中原用 "am trying to" 和 "prepare to" 不太符合一般描述习惯。对于爱好或经常做的事用一般现在时或不持续的现在进行更合适:将 "am trying to" 改为一般现在时的 "try to"。另外 "prepare to take picture" 中名词单复数和冠词使用不当,应为复数 "pictures",并且搭配常用短语是 "plan to" 或 "intend to",此处改为 "plan to";"nature view" 更自然的表达是 "natural landscapes" 或 "natural scenery"。建议:描述习惯性动作或爱好时优先用一般现在时,注意动词搭配和名词复数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer rural areas actually, because I am fascinating about ocean or tree or mountains, because it can, because I will feel feel relaxed when I join this place.

I prefer rural areas, actually, because I am fascinated by the ocean, trees, and mountains, and I feel relaxed when I visit such places.

原句中使用了不正确的动词短语和介词:应使用被动或形容词性结构 "be fascinated by"(而不是 "be fascinating about");列举名词时要用复数形式 "trees"、"mountains";"when I join this place" 用词错误,表示去某地时应用 "visit" 或 "go to",因此改为 "visit such places"。此外,句子中的多余重复 "because it can, because" 需要删去以保证句子通顺。建议:注意常用固定搭配(fascinated by, visit/go to),名词复数形式,避免冗余连接词。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Absolutely other countries because I am living in very busy business style city. It is new happy city and but I really fascinating about natural countries.

Absolutely, other countries, because I live in a very busy, business-style city. It is a modern city, but I am really fascinated by natural countries.

原句中代词与动词、形容词搭配使用错误:"I am living" 可简化为一般现在时 "I live" 表示常住;"business style city" 用法不自然,应为复合形容词 "business-style city" 或更自然的 "a busy commercial city";"It is new happy city" 语序和词形不对,应为 "a modern/ new city" 或 "a happy city" 并加不定冠词 "a";最后一句应使用固定搭配 "fascinated by" 而非 "fascinating about",且 "natural countries" 表达不清晰,可保留为 "natural places/areas/countryside",这里改为原句意的 "natural countries" 并保持 "fascinated by"。建议:注意时态选择(habitual用一般现在时)、冠词使用、形容词位置与复合形容词写法,以及固定搭配如 "fascinated by"。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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