Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like it uh, when I travel, I fix the moment uh and do great picture.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer we use uh, I enjoy sunset and so when I see it I umm, do picture.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
More like I another country because in my country I everyday, uh, see it and it's uh, umm, it's boring for me always. I prefer another countries because it's something new.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на ясной структуре и точной лексике. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали (когда, что именно снимаете). Избегайте слов-паразитов («uh», «umm») и грамматических ошибок (например, «I fix the moment» и «do great picture»). Практикуйте короткие связные предложения и используйте подходящую лексику (capture, take photos).
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos when I travel. I usually capture landscapes and local architecture to remember the trip. For example, I often photograph colorful markets and seaside views because they show the local atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Дайте чёткое предпочитаемое мнение в начале, затем обоснуйте выбор конкретными причинами. Используйте связующие слова (because, so, for example) и конкретные детали (например, sunsets, city skyline, quiet fields). Уберите междометия и говорите более грамотно: «I prefer rural views because…» или «I prefer urban views because…».
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and vivid sunsets. For example, I like photographing fields and lakes at dusk since the light there is very warm and calm.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо («I prefer views in other countries») и объясните почему с конкретикой: уникальные пейзажи, культурные различия, новые впечатления. Устраните повторы и слова-паразиты, улучшите грамматику («I see them every day» → «I see them every day in my country»). Сократите ответ до 2–3 предложений и добавьте пример, чтобы сделать речь живой.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenery and cultural variety. For instance, I enjoy photographing ancient streets abroad that look very different from the places I see every day at home.
× Yes, I like it uh, when I travel, I fix the moment uh and do great picture.
✓ Yes, I like it. When I travel, I capture the moment and take great pictures.
Student used 'fix the moment' and 'do great picture', which are incorrect verb usages and noun form. Use 'capture the moment' (common collocation) and 'take pictures' (correct verb + plural noun). Also add sentence punctuation for clarity.
× I prefer we use uh, I enjoy sunset and so when I see it I umm, do picture.
✓ I prefer places where I can enjoy the sunset, so when I see it I take pictures.
Student used 'we use' incorrectly and 'do picture' which is wrong. Replace with clearer subject and verb: 'I prefer places where I can enjoy the sunset' and 'take pictures'. This fixes pronoun/reference and verb choice.
× More like I another country because in my country I everyday, uh, see it and it's uh, umm, it's boring for me always. I prefer another countries because it's something new.
✓ I prefer other countries because in my country I see the same views every day and they are always boring to me. I prefer other countries because they offer something new.
Multiple plural/singular errors: 'another country' vs 'other countries' and 'it' referring to plural 'views'. Correct to 'other countries' and 'they'. Also fix word order: 'every day' (two words) and move 'always' appropriately. Use 'they offer something new' for clarity.