Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 발음 오류를 교정하고 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다. 현재 답변에는 시제와 동사 형태 오류(예: 'I taking')와 어색한 수치 제시가 있습니다. 또한 한 문장으로 끝내지 말고 간단한 이유나 예를 덧붙여 내용을 풍부하게 하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주면 더욱 효과적입니다. 예: 주어+동사로 주제를 명확히 말한 뒤, 'because' 또는 'so'로 이유나 빈도를 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. When I travel, I usually take at least a hundred photos because I like to capture different views and memories. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and natural landscapes during the day.

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 어순, 관사 사용을 수정해야 합니다. 또한 이유와 구체적 예시를 더하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요. 현재 문장은 어색한 표현('in night', 'very many building')과 중간에 끊긴 부분이 있습니다. 'especially at night'처럼 시간 표현을 올바르게 사용하고, 연결어('because', 'for example')로 이유를 명확히하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views, especially at night, because the city skyline and illuminated buildings look stunning. For example, when I visit a downtown area, I enjoy photographing the reflections of lights on the river.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달과 문법에서 큰 개선이 필요합니다. 의미가 불분명한 부분('I like seeing you', 'see see me views')를 수정하고, 더 구체적인 이유와 예시를 제공하세요. 'our country' 대신 'my country'가 더 자연스럽고, 이유 설명은 단순명료하게 하세요. 또한 문장은 2~3문장 이내로 유지하고 연결어를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel familiar with the scenery and it's very developed in many areas. For instance, modern architecture and well-maintained parks make it easy to find interesting places to photograph.

× Yes, when I go on a trip I taking picture at least 100 photos.

✓ Yes, when I go on a trip I take at least 100 photos.

The student used the -ing form 'taking' after the subject 'I' where a base verb 'take' is required for simple present. Use 'take' to express habitual actions. Also 'picture' should be plural 'photos' or 'pictures' to match quantity. Suggestion: use 'I take at least 100 photos' for correct subject-verb form and plurality.

× I prefer urban areas view because in night is especially very many building and. Light is very beautiful.

✓ I prefer urban views because at night there are especially many buildings and the lights are very beautiful.

Multiple issues matching the provided list: 'urban areas view' should be 'urban views' (word order and noun form), 'in night' should be 'at night' (preposition), 'is especially very many building' is ungrammatical: use 'there are especially many buildings' (there be structure and plural noun), and 'Light is very beautiful' should be plural 'the lights are very beautiful'. Corrections follow standard English: use 'at night' for time expressions, 'there are' for existence with plural nouns, and plural nouns for multiple items. Suggestion: practice 'there is/there are' and time prepositions.

× Actually I prefer our country because I like seeing you.

✓ Actually I prefer our country because I like seeing it.

The student used the pronoun 'you' incorrectly to refer to 'our country'. Use 'it' to refer to a country (singular neuter noun). 'Seeing you' addresses the listener, which changes the meaning. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees with the noun it replaces; use 'it' for countries.

× In our country almost every area is very developed so I can see see me views in surrounding.

✓ In our country almost every area is very developed so I can see many views in the surroundings.

Problems include duplication 'see see', incorrect pronoun 'me' instead of quantifier/adjective, and 'surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings' or 'the surroundings'. 'Many views' is the correct plural form to match 'views'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use 'many' with countable plural nouns, and use 'the surroundings' for the environment around a place.