Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition, use clear sentence structure and add a brief reason or example. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because or for example). Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they capture unique moments. For example, when I visit a mountain or a historic street, I photograph the scenery to remember the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference (urban or rural) with a simple topic sentence, then explain why using a linking word (because or so). Use specific details or examples and avoid unclear words or filler. Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of nature. For example, countryside fields and quiet lakes help me relax, while cities often feel noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: State a clear preference and explain with a specific reason. Use correct verb forms and linking words (such as because or so) and provide a concise example of what differences you expect to see. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I would enjoy photographing architecture and local markets abroad to compare them with sights at home.

× Yes, if if I if I went to you somewhere, somewhere made me feel feel different, I definitely will take some picture.

✓ Yes. If I go somewhere that makes me feel different, I will definitely take some pictures.

The original mixes past and future (Conditional) incorrectly and repeats words. Use a first‑conditional for real present/future possibility: 'If I go' (present simple) + 'I will take' (future). 'Some picture' is uncountable with 'some' and should be plural 'some pictures' or 'a picture'; here plural fits. Remove duplicates and fix word order. Suggestion: Practice forming conditionals: 'If' + present simple, then 'will' + base verb.

× Sure are yours I guess because in my opinion the urban the Millers contest contains not so much fun. We use there is just just consecrating the break.

✓ I prefer urban areas, I guess, because in my opinion rural places do not contain much fun. People there are just relaxing and taking breaks.

The original sentence has severe sentence structure and vocabulary errors and repeated words. 'Sure are yours' is unclear; replace with 'I prefer urban areas.' 'The Millers contest' makes no sense; context suggests contrast with rural areas. 'Not so much fun' should be 'do not contain much fun' or better 'are not very fun.' 'We use there is just just consecrating the break' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'People there are just relaxing and taking breaks.' Correct subjects and verbs and remove duplicates. Suggestion: Keep subject, verb, and object clear, avoid word repetition, and choose vocabulary matching meaning (relaxing, taking breaks).

× Honestly, if I had the opportunity to explore other countries, I definitely will. We go there and to see, see the difference between domestic and there, there can.

✓ Honestly, if I had the opportunity to explore other countries, I would definitely go. I would go there to see the differences between domestic and foreign places.

This is a past-present conditional mismatch: a hypothetical condition ('If I had the opportunity') requires 'would' + base verb, not 'will.' Also 'We go there and to see' is incorrect; use 'I would go there to see.' 'Domestic and there, there can' is unclear; replace with 'domestic and foreign places' or 'home and abroad.' Suggestion: For hypothetical situations use 'If I had... , I would...' Practice pairing conditional clauses correctly and use precise contrasts like 'domestic vs foreign.'