Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., "uh"), and keep responses concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add one specific reason and a brief example using linking words like "because" or "so" to improve coherence and naturalness. Also replace vague phrases ("a bit of a hassle") with precise descriptions.

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy taking photos of views because I prefer being present in the moment. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I focus on the atmosphere and sounds rather than stopping to frame shots, so I rarely carry my camera.

Gợi ý: Remove fillers and the casual ending "and all." Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details joined with linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Keep it within four sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., "tranquil," "scenery").

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural and tranquil scenery such as mountains and rivers. For example, sunsets over fields help me relax and feel refreshed, so I often spend weekends in the countryside to breathe fresh air and unwind.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and be specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two precise reasons with linking words. Replace vague or incorrect phrases ("useful culture," "have a big mountains which is rivers and fields") with accurate descriptions such as "rich culture" and specific landscape features. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Iran has a rich culture and diverse landscapes. For instance, the country has high mountain ranges and fertile valleys with rivers and fields, so I enjoy exploring familiar scenery and cultural sites.

× Plus I don't have a very good camera or phone so I find it a bit of a hassle to try and capture nice photos.

✓ Plus I don't have a very good camera or phone, so I find it a bit of a hassle to try to capture nice photos.

Incorrect verb form: 'to try and capture' is colloquial and not ideal in formal grammar; use 'to try to capture'. Also added a comma before 'so' to join independent clauses correctly.

× I always feel refreshed when I take photos of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ I always feel refreshed when I take photos of sunsets or when I just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

Parallel structure: the sentence lists two actions connected by 'or' and the second lacked the parallel 'when' leading to awkward structure. Adding 'when' makes both parts parallel and clearer.

× I prefer views in my own country because Iran is very big and have a very useful culture and have a big mountains which is rivers and fields.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Iran is very big, has a rich culture, and has large mountains, rivers, and fields.

Multiple subject-verb and noun errors: 'Iran' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'Useful culture' is inappropriate; 'rich culture' fits better. 'Big mountains' should be 'large mountains', and listing geographic features requires correct plurality and commas. Also adjusted word order for clarity and grammatical agreement.