Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 语言自然且信息丰富，但有几处小错误与重复。建议：1) 注意词汇使用准确性（例如将“social moment”改为“special moments”）。2) 避免冗长或重复的表达，可将相似意思合并，控制在5句内。3) 注意冠词和动词形式（如“Photographing”可改为“I find photography a relaxing hobby”）。具体练习：反复练习一句主题句加1–2个支持句，使用连接词（because, so, and）使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing scenery when I travel because it helps me preserve special moments and remember the places I visit. I also like experimenting with different angles and lighting to capture more interesting shots, and I often share my favourites with friends on social media.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且具体，内容充实、连贯性良好。但可进一步提升：1) 增加一个比较性的短句说明为什么乡村比城市更吸引你（例如更少噪音、更自然的光线）。2) 注意句子长度不要超过5句，可以用连接词合并信息。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find natural landscapes like mountains, rivers and fields far more peaceful than busy city scenes. The fresh air and softer light at sunset make taking photos especially relaxing, so I often feel refreshed after a day of shooting in the countryside.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了个人偏好，但有语法和流利性问题：1) 修正语法错误（例如“a few more”不合适，应为“are often more”）。2) 避免语气词和重复（如“uh”与“experi experiencing”）。3) 提供具体例子以增强内容（举一两个国家或建筑风格）。练习建议：模拟回答时先准备主题句，再补充一至两个具体理由或例子，注意发音和流利度。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I often find foreign landscapes more exotic and varied. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional temples in Japan and colourful coastal towns in Portugal, as they offer new architectural styles and cultural scenes that broaden my perspective.

× Taking pictures helps me remember the social moment and the places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

✓ Taking pictures help me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

句子中原文有几个问题：1) “helps” 与主语“Taking pictures”构成主语为动名词短语，但动名词短语视为单数，原用复数动词不正确；为保持简单自然，可改为复数主语“Taking pictures”后用复数动词“help”或更常见改写为复数名词“pictures help”。2) “the social moment and the places” 用法不自然，冠词和词汇选择错误，改为“special moments and places” 更符合语境。建议多注意动名词短语作主语时的动词搭配以及冠词与名词的搭配使用。

× Photographing is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different angles and the lighting to get the perfect shot.

✓ Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

“Photographing” 虽然可用，但在此处作为名词更自然的词是“Photography”。另外“the lighting” 中定冠词通常可省略，直接用“lighting”。建议用更常见的名词形式并注意可省略的冠词。

× It is much more peaceful and relaxing for me and I always feel refreshed when I take pictures of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ It is much more peaceful and relaxing for me, and I always feel refreshed when I take pictures of sunsets or simply enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

句子整体时态无大问题，但衔接词和词语选择可更自然：“just enjoy” 改为“simply enjoy” 更贴切正式表达；并在并列分句之间加逗号。建议注意词语语感和并列连接的标点。

× I actually prefer the views in other countries because landscapes in foreign countries a few more exotic and exciting.

✓ I actually prefer the views in other countries because landscapes in foreign countries are a bit more exotic and exciting.

本句缺少系动词“are”，导致谓语不完整（属现在时态问题）。另外“a few more” 用法不太自然，改为“a bit more” 更常用。建议检查句子是否有完整的主语-谓语结构，并选择更地道的程度副词。

× I love uh experi experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architecture and traveling abroad always give me a fresh perspective of life.

✓ I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architecture, and traveling abroad always gives me a fresh perspective on life.

原句有口误残留“uh experi experiencing”，需删去多余部分，保留“experiencing”。另外“traveling abroad always give” 主语“traveling abroad” 为单数形式，谓语应为“gives”。“perspective of life” 常用搭配为“perspective on life”。建议注意口语中的冗余填充词并检查主谓一致及固定搭配。