Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 在回答中应更直接、有条理地表达观点，减少重复词（如 like、uh）并补充具体细节来支持观点。可以先给出一个主题句表示喜欢拍风景的总体原因，然后用一到两个具体例子说明（比如喜欢拍哪类风景、为何喜欢、拍照时注意的细节），并控制在最多5句之内。练习流利度与连贯性时可使用连接词如 because、for example、so。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, I like photographing city streets at golden hour to capture the light and people’s expressions. I also take close-up shots of nature to study textures and colors.

Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰地给出偏好并用一两个具体原因支持，避免语无伦次和过多填充词。先说偏好（topic sentence），然后用因为…举例说明（例如城市的建筑、夜景或文化活动），并用连接词如 because、for instance 来增强连贯性。控制句子长度，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer diverse architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, I enjoy photographing skyscrapers at dusk and busy markets, which provide interesting colors and human interactions.

Gợi ý: 在表达比较偏好时，先明确答案，然后用两到三点具体原因支持，尽量避免重复和犹豫语气。可以给出具体例子（例如喜欢哪些国家的景色或具体景观类型）并用连接词如 because、for example、so 来组织句子，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, I love photographing alpine mountains in Switzerland and historic buildings in Italy, which are very different from what I see at home.

× Things like different views can help us to know like how our body look and honestly like in my personal ideas, I always like to take pictures of my front.

✓ Different views can help us know how our body looks, and honestly, in my opinion, I always like to take pictures of my front.

句子结构混乱，有多余填充词（like, honestly, in my personal ideas），且主谓不一致（body look → body looks）。建议删除多余词，使用更简洁的表达，并确保主语与动词单数/复数一致。

× My front wheel seems like I can get to see like how how my legs.

✓ When I take pictures of my front, it seems I can see how my legs look.

原句结构不完整且有重复（how how）、填充词（like），无法表达完整意思。应重组句子以保证主语、谓语和宾语完整，并去掉多余词。

× Things like the big cities can make me feel excited and because like, I like exploring my futures in the like in the unknowing, uh, unknown areas in the.

✓ Big cities make me feel excited because I like exploring my future in unknown areas.

句子中有多余的填充词（things like, like, uh）、重复表达（unknowing, unknown）、不完整短语（in the.）。需删掉重复和填充词，简化结构，并把名词复数/单数（futures → future）改为正确形式。

× There are a lot of like the if you can see the, uh, overall pictures of the.

✓ There are a lot of places where you can get an overall view.

原句片段不完整，含有填充词（like, uh）和多余定冠词（the），导致语义不清。建议重写为完整短句，去掉口语填充词并使用恰当名词。

× I prefer views in other countries since if I am only staying at one place, I will feel boring and nervous since I, I don't, I don't want to always be always, uh, be staying in one place, but I like, uh, traveling around to stay different views of like the, the mountain, the buildings in different countries, things like.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because if I stay in one place, I will feel bored and anxious. I don't want to stay in one place all the time; I like travelling to see different views such as mountains and buildings in different countries.

句子重复、含有许多口语填充词（uh, like, things like），并有词汇搭配错误（feel boring → feel bored; nervous 用词不当，改为 anxious 更合适；stay different views → see different views；be always staying → stay all the time）。建议去除重复与填充词，改正形容词与动词搭配，并把长句拆成更清晰的句子。