Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve anlamlı, ancak tekrarlara ve uzun cümleye eğilim var. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için konu cümlesini net kurun, sonra 1-2 destekleyici detay ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) kullanın ve gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından ("views" ve "pictures"in tekrarları) kaçının. Ayrıca cümleleri kısaltarak 3-4 cümle sınırına uyun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember places and feelings. For example, when I look at a photo from a trip, it brings back the atmosphere and small details I might forget. So I often take pictures to preserve memories.

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan ama dil bilgisi hatası ve belirsiz ifade var ("I love there most"). Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve nedenini somut bir örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaç kullanarak akışı iyileştirin (because, for instance). 2-3 cümleyle açıklama yapın.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I feel more comfortable with the city's energy and amenities. For example, I enjoy looking at modern architecture and busy streets, which feel lively and interesting. Also, urban parks offer a nice contrast to the buildings.

Gợi ý: Cevapta anlatım bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları var ("it makes me feel more different", "it's made all the views just impressed me"). İfadenizi netleştirin: hangi yönleri farklı bulduğunuzu açıklayın ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Gereksiz kelime ve tekrarları azaltın; 2-3 cümle yeterli olacaktır. Ayrıca zamir ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often look more unique and surprising to me. For example, when I visited Thailand, the temples and tropical landscapes were unlike what I see at home and left a strong impression. Therefore I enjoy exploring foreign scenery.

× Yes, I like taking different pictures and views because when I go back and see those pictures it makes me feel really happy and makes me remember all those memories and views.

✓ Yes, I like taking different pictures and views because when I go back and see those pictures, they make me feel really happy and help me remember those memories and views.

The sentence uses 'it makes me' to refer back to plural noun 'pictures' which is incorrect; use 'they make' for plural subject. Also 'makes me remember all those memories' is awkward and repetitive; use 'help me remember those memories' or simply 'help me remember them'. Ensure pronoun agrees with plural antecedent and choose verbs that naturally collocate (help remember).

× I prefer urban areas, it makes me feel more comfortable and I love there most.

✓ I prefer urban areas; they make me feel more comfortable and I like them the most.

The comma splice should be fixed (use semicolon or separate sentences). 'It makes me' incorrectly uses singular pronoun for plural 'urban areas'; use 'they make me'. 'I love there most' is incorrect because 'love' requires an object and 'there' is wrong; use 'I like them the most' or 'I love cities the most'.

× I prefer views in other countries because it makes me feel more different and when I was in Thailand it's made all the views just impressed me so much more than my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they make me feel different, and when I was in Thailand, all the views impressed me much more than those in my country.

Several tense and agreement errors: 'it makes me feel more different' should be 'they make me feel different' to agree with plural 'views' and avoid awkward 'more different'. 'It's made all the views just impressed me' mixes tenses and structure; use simple past 'all the views impressed me' for a completed past experience. Also use 'those in my country' to compare plural noun 'views'.