Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and correct articles and verb forms (e.g., “take pictures”, “when I see”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures because I like capturing scenes that catch my eye. For example, I often photograph colourful street murals and unusual shop displays when I walk around my neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”). Use correct word forms and avoid vague phrases like “nature wise.” Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because of the natural scenery and tranquillity. For example, rolling hills and lakes provide varied compositions and better lighting for photography, which I find more appealing than crowded city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and complete the thought. Use proper grammar (e.g., “It depends on the area”) and give a clear comparison with specific examples. Avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words like “however” or “for instance.”

Ví dụ: It depends on the location. For instance, I prefer photographing ancient temples in my country because they have unique cultural details, but I would choose another country if it offered landscapes or architecture that I can’t find at home.

× Yes, definitely, I love to take a pictures because when I saw any things which attract me more, I tried to.

✓ Yes, definitely. I love to take pictures because when I see anything that attracts me, I try to.

Errors: incorrect article 'a pictures' (should be plural 'pictures' with no article) and wrong past tense 'saw' and 'tried' for habitual present; 'any things' should be 'anything'; relative clause 'which attract me more' should be 'that attracts me'. Suggestion: Use plural without an indefinite article for general activities ('take pictures'), use present simple for habitual actions ('see', 'try'), use 'anything' for singular noncount/indefinite item, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses ('that attracts').

× Mostly I prefer rural areas compared to urban area because of nature wise.

✓ Mostly I prefer rural areas to urban areas because of the natural scenery.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'compared to' in this context—use 'prefer X to Y'; inconsistent number 'urban area' should match plural 'rural areas'; phrase 'because of nature wise' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons, match singular/plural, and replace awkward phrase with 'because of the natural scenery' or 'because of nature'.

× We can take a very good picture in different views which fascinating the viewers and attract more tourists, attract more people.

✓ We can take very good pictures of different scenes that fascinate viewers and attract more tourists.

Errors: awkward 'in different views' should be 'of different scenes' or 'from different viewpoints'; 'which fascinating the viewers' lacks verb form—should be 'that fascinate viewers'; repeated 'attract more tourists, attract more people' is redundant. Suggestion: Use plural 'pictures' to match 'we can take', use 'that' with correct verb form 'fascinate', and avoid redundancy by combining ideas ('attract more tourists').

× It's depend upon the area.

✓ It depends on the area.

Errors: 'It's depend' uses base verb instead of third person singular present 'depends'; preposition 'upon' is acceptable but 'on' is more natural. Suggestion: Conjugate verb for third person singular ('depends') and use 'on' for simplicity.

× For example in some area in my country which is very famous for their own special things, I prefer my country to any another country.

✓ For example, in some areas of my country that are very famous for their special features, I prefer my country to any other country.

Errors: 'some area' should be plural 'some areas'; 'which is very famous for their own special things' mixes singular/plural and uses 'their' for singular—use 'that are very famous for their special features'; 'any another country' is ungrammatical—use 'any other country'. Suggestion: Match numbers, use relative clause with correct verb agreement, use 'other' instead of 'another' after 'any'.

× But if we as a journal we can.

✓ But if we are travelling as journalists, we can.

Errors: fragment 'if we as a journal we can' is ungrammatical and missing verb/complement; 'journal' likely intended 'journalists' or 'as a journal' is wrong. Suggestion: Clarify meaning—use 'if we are traveling/working as journalists' or 'as a journalist' and complete the sentence with what can be done (e.g., 'we can take pictures abroad').