Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct word choice, and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Include a brief reason and a specific example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes because each place has unique features and beauty. For example, I often photograph coastline sunsets to capture the colours and mood, which helps me remember special trips.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid filler words. State a clear preference or say you like both, then give contrasting specific details using appropriate linking words (e.g., “however”, “on the other hand”). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘city lights’, ‘rural scenery’). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different atmospheres. For example, city views have vibrant lights and tall buildings, while rural views have peaceful fields and natural colours, so I take different kinds of photos depending on my mood.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear reason and one specific example of what impressed you, using correct vocabulary. Link sentences logically and finish the thought. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because the landscapes and coastal scenery are very striking. For example, when I visited twice I was impressed by the clear blue sea and well-preserved coastal towns, which made great subjects for photographs.

× I like taking photos of different landscapes at all citizens because they are they are all very beautiful and unique and I want to photograph them to record those unforgettable moments so I can't look back on.

✓ I like taking photos of different landscapes all over the country because they are all very beautiful and unique, and I want to photograph them to record those unforgettable moments so I can look back on them.

Use of preposition 'at' with 'all citizens' is incorrect and unclear. 'All over the country' fits the intended meaning. Remove duplicated 'they are'. 'Can't look back on' is the opposite of intended meaning; use 'can look back on them'. Also add 'them' to refer to 'moments'. Improve sentence flow with a comma before 'and'. Suggested practice: replace incorrect prepositions with context-appropriate phrases and check pronoun references.

× Uh, they are both what I like umm because they have very different character basics.

✓ Uh, I like both because they have very different characteristics.

Phrase 'what I like' and 'character basics' are awkward. Use 'I like both' and 'characteristics' (noun) for clarity. Remove filler words 'umm' in formal responses. Practice using concise noun forms for descriptions.

× For example in the city I enjoy staying the alcohol lights in enabling their very prosperous, but in the urban area I enjoy the most.

✓ For example, in the city I enjoy the bright lights and lively atmosphere, but in rural areas I enjoy the scenery the most.

Original sentence contains incorrect words ('alcohol lights', 'enabling their very prosperous') and poor structure. 'Alcohol lights' is incorrect and likely meant 'bright lights'; 'enabling their very prosperous' is grammatically wrong. Clarify contrast between city and rural areas and use parallel structure: 'in the city... but in rural areas...'. Practice choosing accurate nouns and creating parallel clauses.

× I prefer the views in other countries, especially Japan.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries, especially those in Japan.

Original is mostly acceptable but adding 'those in' clarifies that 'views' refers to scenes in Japan rather than the country itself. This is a minor prepositional/phrase clarity improvement.

× I've been there twice. I've been there twice and and what impressed me most is that come up who are it's a place, it's a place in Japan and I enjoy the landscape there and I enjoy the blue sea. They're very.

✓ I've been there twice, and what impressed me most was a place I visited in Japan; I enjoyed the landscape there and the blue sea; they were beautiful.

Repetition 'I've been there twice' is redundant. Mix of present and past tense is inconsistent: use past tense 'was' and 'enjoyed' when describing past impressions. Original contains incoherent fragments ('come up who are it's a place'). Replace with clear phrasing 'a place I visited'. Finish the sentence with a descriptive adjective 'beautiful' rather than fragment 'They're very.' Practice consistency in tense when recounting past experiences and remove redundant repetition.