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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's my hobby. When I go outside I catch your different photos like landscape, nature, either situation and etcetera.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer rural areas because I was born in village and uh, village life is very simple and everything is natural. Uh, you can find a beach and everything. People are very simple and naive and everyone is very friendly, so I like to prefer even.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Obviously my country because I love my country and I have the emotion about my country, so why not? And my country people are very naive and friendly.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Be more natural and clear: respond directly, correct grammar, avoid odd phrases (e.g. "catch your different photos"). Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences) and add a brief specific detail or example. Use linking words only if expanding.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and natural scenes, such as sunsets at the river, because I like capturing light and color.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition ("I like to prefer"), and replace 'naive' with a more appropriate word (e.g. 'friendly' or 'down-to-earth'). Include one specific reason and a short supporting detail, linked logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas. I grew up in a village, so I appreciate the simple, natural environment and friendly, down-to-earth people; for instance, I enjoy photographing quiet beaches and small farms where the light is beautiful.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and provide a specific, natural reason. Avoid vague phrases like 'I have the emotion about my country' and avoid using 'naive' when you mean friendly. One succinct supporting detail or example is enough.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its landscapes and culture. For example, I love photographing traditional festivals and coastal scenes at home, where I know the best locations and times for good light.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, it's my hobby. When I go outside I catch your different photos like landscape, nature, either situation and etcetera.

Yes, it's my hobby. When I go outside I take various photos of landscapes, nature, and different scenes, etcetera.

The verb 'catch' is incorrect for taking photographs; use 'take' (common collocation). 'Different photos' is vague; 'various photos' or 'photos of landscapes' is clearer. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' when speaking generally. 'Either situation' is incorrect phrasing; use 'different scenes'. 'Etcetera' is unnecessary after 'and' but can remain; punctuation and list form adjusted for clarity and correct usage of nouns. Relevant grammar problem type: verb choice and noun forms (mapped to 'Verb in the present participle form' because original uses incorrect verb form/use). Suggestions: use 'take' for photos, pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally, and list items clearly.

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer rural areas because I was born in village and uh, village life is very simple and everything is natural.

I prefer rural areas because I was born in a village, and village life is very simple and everything is natural.

The noun 'village' is a countable singular noun and requires an article 'a' when speaking of one village where the speaker was born. Also added a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a village' or 'the village' depending on context; here 'a village' is appropriate.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Uh, you can find a beach and everything.

You can find beaches and other natural features.

The phrase 'a beach and everything' is informal and vague. If speaking generally about rural areas, plural 'beaches' or 'a beach' depending on context is better. 'Other natural features' clarifies 'everything'. Suggestion: be specific and match number (singular/plural) to general statements.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× People are very simple and naive and everyone is very friendly, so I like to prefer even.

People are simple and friendly, and everyone is very welcoming, so I prefer it.

'Simple and naive' can be awkward or negative; 'simple' and 'friendly' or 'welcoming' is more natural. 'I like to prefer even' is ungrammatical and redundant: 'prefer' already expresses liking more; use 'so I prefer it' or 'so I like it.' Suggestion: avoid redundant constructions like 'like to prefer' and choose appropriate adjectives.

Verb in the present participle form

× Obviously my country because I love my country and I have the emotion about my country, so why not?

Obviously my own country, because I love it and I feel emotional about it, so why not?

Repeating 'my country' is redundant; replace with pronoun 'it'. 'I have the emotion about my country' is unidiomatic; use 'I feel emotional about it' or 'I have strong feelings about it.' Suggestion: use pronouns to avoid repetition and choose natural expressions for emotions.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× And my country people are very naive and friendly.

And people in my country are very friendly and welcoming.

'My country people' is nonstandard; use 'people in my country' or 'my fellow countrymen.' 'Naive' may sound negative; 'friendly and welcoming' is more natural. Suggestion: prefer neutral or positive adjectives and standard noun phrases like 'people in my country.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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