Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I am a photographer, I like taking pictures. Some things we with and spectacular mountain and river. I really enjoy them 'cause we was is so perfect and beauty. I prefer the things and mountain.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like purple vivers in rural areas 'cause I'm a born a rural. The small rural have a mountain and river. So I was a child started like a rural. Urban is not is a beautiful area.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer we was in my own country and better than the euro country cause our beautiful viewers have a spectacular mountain and or another cold tree. I like that and a lot of.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 注意句子結構與時態一致性,避免語法錯誤和冗長。回答時先直接回應問題(主句),然後用一到兩個具體細節支持。使用連接詞如“because”或“for example”讓語意更連貫;控制在最多五句內。可改正名詞與形容詞搭配(e.g. “spectacular mountains and rivers”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm a photographer, so I enjoy taking pictures of landscapes. For example, I often photograph spectacular mountains and rivers because I love their natural beauty. These scenes give me interesting light and composition to work with.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 注意發音或拼寫導致意義模糊(如“purple vivers”應為“pure/pleasing views”或“rivers”)。回答要先說明偏好,然後給出兩個明確理由,使用連接詞連貫句子,並保持語法正確(主詞與動詞一致、正確時態)。避免顯得重複或不清楚。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas. I grew up in the countryside, so I feel more connected to mountains and rivers there. For example, rural scenes are quieter and have cleaner air, which makes them more peaceful than busy cities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 回答要先直接表態,然後給出具體比較理由並舉例。注意語法(如主詞、動詞、冠詞)和詞彙選擇(“views”而非“viewers”)。避免模糊描述,說明哪些景觀特別吸引你(例如山脈、森林、氣候),並使用連接詞如“because”或“while”。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country. The landscapes at home have spectacular mountains and dense forests that I find very attractive. For example, our mountain scenery and cool, tree‑covered areas feel more familiar and unique compared with places I've seen abroad.
× Some things we with and spectacular mountain and river.
✓ Some places have spectacular mountains and rivers.
原句句子结构混乱,主语、谓语和宾语没有正确组织。使用“Some places have...”来表达“有些地方有……”,并使用复数形式“mountains and rivers”。建议:按英文常见句型“主语+动词+宾语”重组句子。
× I really enjoy them 'cause we was is so perfect and beauty.
✓ I really enjoy them because they are so perfect and beautiful.
原句主谓不一致且用词错误。“we was is”混合了第一人称和第三人称以及不同时态,正确应为第三人称复数“they are”。“beauty”是名词,应使用形容词“beautiful”。建议:注意主语与动词的人称一致,形容人或物用形容词。
× I prefer the things and mountain.
✓ I prefer landscapes and mountains.
原句中“the things and mountain”搭配不自然且冠词使用错误。使用更合适的名词“landscapes”并用复数“mountains”。建议:根据语境选择正确名词并使用复数或冠词。
× I like purple vivers in rural areas 'cause I'm a born a rural.
✓ I like rural views because I was born in the countryside.
原句存在拼写和词类错误:“purple vivers”应为“rural views”。“I'm a born a rural”结构错误,正确表达为“I was born in the countryside”。建议:注意拼写并用正确动词时态表达出生背景。
× The small rural have a mountain and river.
✓ Small rural areas have mountains and rivers.
原句冠词和名词单复数搭配错误。“The small rural”不是正确表达,应为“small rural areas”;且应使用复数“mountains and rivers”。建议:复数可数名词表示一般事实时常省略定冠词,注意名词复数。
× So I was a child started like a rural.
✓ So when I was a child, I started to like rural life.
原句时态和语序混乱,缺少连接词并且动词形式不正确。使用时间状语从句“when I was a child”并用过去时“started to like”。建议:按时间顺序组织句子,使用适当的连词和动词形式。
× Urban is not is a beautiful area.
✓ Urban areas are not very beautiful.
原句重复“is”且单复数使用错误,应使用复数“Urban areas”并用系动词“are”。建议:注意避免重复动词,主语复数时动词也要用复数形式。
× I prefer we was in my own country and better than the euro country cause our beautiful viewers have a spectacular mountain and or another cold tree.
✓ I prefer the views in my own country because they are better than those in European countries; our beautiful scenery has spectacular mountains and other evergreen trees.
原句时态、人称和词汇使用混乱。“I prefer we was”不合语法,应为“I prefer the views in my own country”。比较结构应使用“better than those in...”。“viewers”误用,应为“views”或“scenery”;“or another cold tree”措词不当,改为“other evergreen trees”。建议:使用正确名词并保持时态一致,比较时替代被比较的名词。
× I prefer we was in my own country and better than the euro country cause our beautiful viewers have a spectacular mountain and or another cold tree. I like that and a lot of.
✓ I prefer views in my own country to those in European countries because our scenery has spectacular mountains and many other trees. I like it a lot.
原句介词和比较结构使用错误,应使用“prefer A to B”来表达偏好比较;“euro country”应为“European countries”;“I like that and a lot of”不自然,改为“I like it a lot”。建议:学习固定搭配“prefer A to B”,用正确形容词形式以及自然的短语表达程度。