Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., ‘interested’, ‘take pictures’, ‘save them’). Avoid filler sounds like “uh.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to capture memories, and when I look at these photos later they make me feel nostalgic and happy.

Gợi ý: Give a single clear topic sentence and combine supporting details into coherent sentences using linking words. Correct repetition and grammar (remove duplicate words, use singular/plural correctly). Be specific about what you like in rural areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy green spaces and natural scenery. For instance, I like seeing forests, rivers and wide landscapes, which feel peaceful compared with busy cities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and finish your thought; avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a reason and one concrete example, using linking words to clarify. Fix grammar mistakes (e.g., ‘there are’, ‘marshes’).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, in the south there are marshes and coastal wetlands, while other regions have mountains and forests, so I can find many different types of scenery without traveling abroad.

× I'm very interesting in taking picture and save it, uh, as a memory.

✓ I'm very interested in taking pictures and saving them as memories.

The adjective 'interesting' is incorrect; the correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'interested'. 'Taking picture' needs plural 'pictures'. Parallel gerunds require 'taking' and 'saving' (both -ing forms). Use 'them' to refer back to 'pictures' and 'memories' in plural form. Suggestion: Use 'interested in' + gerund, plural nouns when general (pictures, memories), and keep parallel -ing forms.

× This give me a beautiful feelings when I watch them again.

✓ This gives me beautiful feelings when I watch them again.

Subject-verb agreement plus article/noun form issue: 'This' (singular) requires the verb 'gives' (third person singular). 'A beautiful feelings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'feelings' — remove 'a' or change to singular 'a beautiful feeling'. Suggestion: Match verb to subject ('gives') and ensure articles agree with noun number ('beautiful feelings' or 'a beautiful feeling').

× I prefer I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy watching. A green areas and trees, river, nature, landscape.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy watching green areas, trees, rivers, nature, and landscapes.

Repeating 'I prefer' is redundant. Sentence fragments: 'A green areas' mixes article with plural noun and 'watching.' Combine into one sentence and list items in parallel form. Plural forms 'areas' and 'rivers' should be consistent; include conjunction 'and' before last item. Suggestion: Remove repetition, use plural nouns consistently, and present a single coherent sentence with parallel items.

× I prefer views in my country because there there are many different views like marches in the South of my country and.

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are many different views, like marshes in the south of my country.

Duplicate 'there' should be a single 'there'. 'Marches' is likely a misspelling of 'marshes' (wetlands). 'South' should be lowercase 'south' when used with 'of my country'. The trailing 'and' is incomplete and must be removed or completed. Use a comma before 'like' to introduce examples. Suggestion: Remove duplicates, correct spelling to 'marshes', lowercase directional words when used with 'of my country', and complete or remove unfinished conjunctions.