Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和简洁，减少填充词（如 umm, uh），并用一到两句具体说明你拍照的动机或风格。可以先给主题句，再用具体细节支持，例如你常拍什么景物、使用何种构图或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because I have an eye for detail and beauty. For example, I often capture street scenes and sunsets, focusing on interesting light and composition to make ordinary moments look special.

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应‘urban or rural’，需要先给明确偏好（urban或rural），然后用一到两句具体原因和例子支持。避免重复前一句话的内容，使用连词使逻辑清晰（for example, because, so）。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse scenes and dynamic light. For example, I like photographing busy streets, colorful markets and modern architecture, which give me opportunities to experiment with angles and motion.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语音错误（wheels）并且中断。应先明确回答（own country or other countries），然后给出具体理由和简短例子，句子完整，避免中途停顿。可以提到国家的多样性或便利性，并说明如何利用假期拍摄。

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it’s geographically diverse and easy to travel around. For instance, during summer and winter holidays my family and I visit different regions, so I can photograph beaches, mountains and traditional festivals without going abroad.

× Yes I do, I like taking pictures umm, because I am good at uh, finding beauty and beautiful things I think is my creative.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures because I'm good at finding beauty in things; I think it's my creative talent.

原句中形容词/副词使用及句子结构混乱："finding beauty and beautiful things" 重复表达且不自然；"I think is my creative" 语法不完整，缺主语和名词形式。建议使用更自然的表达如"finding beauty in things"，并把最后一部分改为名词短语如"my creative talent"，同时把句子分成两句以便更清晰。注意逗号和停顿的使用，口语中过多填充词（umm, uh）应减少。

× Yes I do. I enjoy taking pictures because I have an eye for beauty and like capturing in interesting things. I like uh, I often take a photo photograph or to.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures because I have an eye for beauty and like capturing interesting things. I often take photographs.

原句中动词+ing 的使用和词序错误："capturing in interesting things" 中多余介词"in"，正确应为"capturing interesting things"。句子最后"I often take a photo photograph or to" 是不完整且重复（photo/photograph），应改为简洁的名词复数"photographs"。同时去掉多余的口语填充词。

× I like I prefer wheels in my country because my country is very large. Every vacation like summer vacation or winter vacation, my mother will.

✓ I prefer views in my country because it is very large. During vacations, like summer or winter, my mother will...

句子结构混乱且有词语错误："I like I prefer wheels" 很可能是口误，应为"I prefer views"；"my country is very large" 可与偏好连用；第二句是未完成句（缺谓语内容），并且"Every vacation like summer vacation or winter vacation" 的表达啰嗦，可改为"During vacations, like summer or winter"。最后应补全母亲会做什么的内容（原文没有），否则句子不完整。