Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid filler words (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention particular scenes or reasons to make your answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit Jakarta I often photograph people on the MRT and busy streets because I enjoy capturing everyday city life. This helps me practice composition and tells a story about urban life.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear abbreviations (Rd., RT). Give concrete examples of what you photograph in urban areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and variety of city scenes. For instance, in Jakarta I often photograph crowded markets, street vendors, and modern architecture, which give me interesting contrasts and colors.

Gợi ý: Correct pronunciation and grammar, and give a clear reason with specific details. Replace vague phrases ("so warm", "nice to my camera", "aesthetics") with concrete descriptions of what you like to photograph abroad.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because the streets and temples offer unique colors and textures. For example, I enjoy photographing cherry blossoms, traditional wooden houses, and neat urban scenes, which look great in my photos.

× I love to go to, uh, Jakarta and I like, uh, taking pictures of people or of the road or, or I like taking picture in MRT or the trans Jakarta.

✓ I love to go to Jakarta and I like taking pictures of people or of the road, and I like taking pictures in the MRT or on TransJakarta.

Errors: missing article before 'pictures' and inconsistent pluralization; incorrect preposition with 'TransJakarta'. Use plural 'pictures' because multiple photos are implied, include 'the' before proper nouns like 'MRT', and use 'on' for buses/transit. Also remove filler commas and repeated words for clarity. Suggested improvement: use definite article with known transit systems ('the MRT'), use plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos, and use appropriate prepositions ('on TransJakarta').

× I love taking pictures of different views.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views.

This sentence is already correct. 'Pictures' and 'views' are correctly plural to indicate multiple items. No change needed. Suggested improvement: none.

× I prefer urban areas because I love city and I, I'm a city girl.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I love the city and I'm a city girl.

Error: missing definite article 'the' before 'city' when referring to the city in general. Use 'the city' to indicate the urban environment as a concept. The rest of the present tense usage is correct. Suggested improvement: include 'the' before nouns that refer to a general, known concept ('the city').

× I love to I like to go to Jakarta and taking pictures of a lot of people in, in Rd. in in RT.

✓ I like to go to Jakarta and take pictures of a lot of people in the roads and residential areas.

Errors: mixed infinitive and -ing forms ('like to go' and 'taking') create inconsistency. Use parallel structure: 'like to go' and 'take pictures' or 'like going' and 'taking pictures'. Also abbreviations 'Rd.' and 'RT' are unclear; replace with 'roads and residential areas' for clarity. Include 'the' for general places. Suggested improvement: maintain parallel verb forms and avoid unclear abbreviations; choose either infinitive or gerund consistently.

× I prefer refuse in other countries, especially Japan and I love the like of Japan.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries, especially Japan, and I love the look of Japan.

Multiple errors: 'prefer refuse' is incorrect—likely intended 'prefer to travel' or 'prefer views in'. 'the like of Japan' is ungrammatical; use 'the look of Japan' or 'Japan's aesthetic'. Also add commas for clarity. Use appropriate verb 'travel to' or 'views in'. Suggested improvement: choose correct verb for meaning ('prefer to travel to', 'prefer views in') and use correct noun phrases ('the look of Japan' or 'Japan's aesthetic').

× It's so warm and it's it's nice to my camera and it's Japan is so aesthetics.

✓ It's so beautiful and it looks great with my camera; Japan is very aesthetic.

Errors: 'warm' may be incorrect descriptor for Japan in many contexts; 'nice to my camera' is awkward—use 'looks great with my camera'. 'It's Japan is so aesthetics' is ungrammatical: use 'Japan is very aesthetic' or 'Japan's aesthetics are beautiful'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and adjective usage. Suggested improvement: use appropriate adjectives ('beautiful', 'aesthetic') and correct collocations ('looks great in photos', 'suits my camera').