Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce fillers (ums, uhs), avoid hesitations and repetitions, and structure your reply with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use varied vocabulary (e.g., ‘enthusiast’ instead of ‘nerd’ if you want a positive tone).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I particularly like photographing buildings and their surroundings because I’m interested in architectural details and how people interact with spaces. For example, I often capture doorways, windows and street scenes to show character and atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Clarify your main preference with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases (e.g., ‘passport date’, ‘abuse’). Provide concrete examples of what you would photograph in rural areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer diverse natural scenes and peaceful environments. For example, I can photograph wide fields at sunrise and small country lanes with old stone walls, which provide interesting textures and lighting. Moreover, the lack of crowds makes it easier to compose thoughtful shots.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give two concise, specific supporting details and one brief example. Reduce filler words and use varied adjectives (e.g., ‘breathtaking’, ‘diverse’). Keep the answer fluent and coherent with linking words (for example, also / for instance).

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because the landscapes are incredibly diverse and photogenic. For instance, I can shoot dramatic mountain ranges, peaceful beaches, and historic architecture all within a few hours’ travel. Also, being familiar with local spots helps me find the best light at sunrise and sunset.

× I always used to take uh oh, the pictures of uh, the building and then, you know, the surrounding and like the things just near me I used to take.

✓ I always used to take pictures of buildings and the surroundings and things near me.

Pronoun and determiner use is inconsistent and repetitive (the pictures of the building, the surrounding, things just near me). Also wordiness and filler words were present. Use plural nouns (buildings, surroundings) to match general habit and remove unnecessary pronouns and repetition. Suggestion: remove fillers (uh, you know) and keep concise noun phrases.

× Oh, I love rural areas because, you know, you can take like a thousands of pictures even in one places because, uh, I, I would say it depends on your perspective.

✓ Oh, I love rural areas because you can take thousands of pictures even in one place; I would say it depends on your perspective.

Incorrect use of quantifier with plural noun: 'a thousands' is wrong; use 'thousands' or 'a thousand'. Also 'one places' mixes singular and plural — use 'one place'. Removed fillers and corrected number agreement.

× If you take, uh, the abuse or depending on, umm, your passport date, it, it will, you know, it will get a lot of photos even in one places and I.

✓ Depending on your purpose or the time of your visit, you can get a lot of photos even in one place.

Original sentence contains incorrect and unclear pronouns ('the abuse', 'passport date') and redundant phrases ('it, it will'). The intended meaning seems to be 'purpose' or 'time of visit'. Also fixed 'one places' to 'one place' and removed trailing incomplete 'and I'. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and avoid repetition.

× Oh, I prefer my own country view.

✓ Oh, I prefer the views in my own country.

Use plural 'views' or a plural noun phrase to match general preference. Also include article 'the' before 'views' to specify the topic. This makes the sentence sound natural in present simple when stating a preference.

× Uh, it was totally breathtaking.

✓ They are totally breathtaking.

Tense and reference issue: 'it was' refers to a singular thing in past tense, but the student is speaking generally about views, so present tense and plural reference ('they are') is more appropriate. Also align tense with preference statements.

× Umm, you know, like everywhere you say screen places and you can take picture of historical places and like amazing, uh, nature views like sunrise, sunset, everything there, the sea and the mountains, everything is there.

✓ There are many scenic places where you can take pictures of historical sites and amazing natural views like sunrises and sunsets; the sea and the mountains are all there.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'you say screen places' (should be 'scenic places'), singular/plural mismatches ('picture' -> 'pictures', 'sunrise, sunset' -> 'sunrises and sunsets'). Reordered for clarity and corrected vocabulary. Suggestion: use 'scenic' not 'screen', maintain plural nouns for general statements, and use articles appropriately.

× So I love my country.

✓ So I love my country.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It properly expresses a general preference in present tense.