Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and word forms, and keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Add one specific detail (where or what you photograph) and a linking phrase. Practice common collocations: "take photos of," "scenic views," "when I travel."

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. When I travel, I usually take pictures of scenic landscapes, especially coastlines and mountain ranges. For example, last year I photographed the rocky cliffs at sunrise to capture the light and colour.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then two supporting reasons linked properly. Fix sentence structure and use linking words like "because" and "however." Avoid questions in place of statements. Be specific about what appeals to you in rural views.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and visually striking. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small villages since the natural light and quiet atmosphere make it easier to capture calm, timeless scenes.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence, correct grammar (use "it is"), and add a specific example to support your preference. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example." Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum and avoid vague phrases like "interesting sorts of."

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best locations and seasons for great light. For example, I often visit the coastal cliffs near my hometown in autumn, when the colours and dramatic weather create stunning scenes.

× More specifically, when I going to the travel I capture some scenic scenic scen.

✓ More specifically, when I travel I capture some scenic views.

The phrase 'when I going to the travel' is ungrammatical because 'going' requires an auxiliary (am/is/are) for present continuous or should be replaced by the simple verb 'travel' for habitual action. Also 'the travel' is incorrect; 'travel' as a verb does not need 'the'. Repeating 'scenic' and 'scen' is an error; use 'scenic views'. Suggestion: use simple present 'when I travel' for habitual actions and a correct noun 'views'.

× Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy.

✓ Actually I enjoy both, but mostly I prefer rural scenes.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject-verb-object structure and mixes phrases awkwardly. 'Mostly I guess enjoy' misorders words and uses 'guess' redundantly. To improve, use a clear subject and verb ('I enjoy') and a coherent contrast ('but mostly I prefer...').

× I prefer taking photos in rural areas. Is it very beautiful and also peaceful? Part of the reason?

✓ I prefer taking photos in rural areas because they are very beautiful and peaceful; that's part of the reason.

The sentence fragments 'Is it very beautiful and also peaceful?' and 'Part of the reason?' are not proper statements. Use adjectives 'beautiful' and 'peaceful' to describe 'areas' with correct verb 'are' and connect clauses using 'because' to explain reasons. Combine fragments into a single coherent sentence for clarity.

× Speaking for only myself, I enjoy capturing views in my country as it very beautiful and also it has interesting sorts of tourist attractions which I find really breathtaking views.

✓ Speaking for myself, I enjoy capturing views in my country because it is very beautiful and has many interesting tourist attractions, which I find really breathtaking.

Errors include missing verb 'is' after 'it' and awkward use of 'it has interesting sorts of tourist attractions' and redundant 'breathtaking views'. Replace 'speaking for only myself' with 'speaking for myself'. Use 'because' for explanation, include the verb 'is', simplify 'sorts of' to 'many', and avoid repeating 'views'.