Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and slight grammar issues (e.g., use 'especially my university friends' and 'get away from work' should be 'take a break from work').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially my university friends. For example, talking with them helps me take a break from work, and we often share funny stories or campus memories, which cheers me up.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and more precise, grammatically correct supporting details. Clarify who you mean by 'as fathers' and use linking words to connect ideas. Include specific examples of topics to make the answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: I usually talk about family life and my hobbies. In particular, as a father, I often discuss my children's school progress and daily routines, and we also exchange tips about hobbies like cycling or cooking.

Gợi ý: Make the reason clear and correct grammar. Use linking words to contrast the two choices and provide a concise explanation. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one because conversations are more focused and personal, whereas group chats can be noisy and people may interrupt each other.

Gợi ý: Use a smooth structure: topic sentence, two clear reasons with linking words, and correct vocabulary ('facial expressions'). Reduce hesitations and repeated words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more engaging and allows me to read body language and facial expressions. For example, seeing someone's expression helps me understand their feelings better than text messages do.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, confident topic sentence and then explain briefly with specific details. Correct grammar and clarify meaning (e.g., 'I don't usually argue with friends because our conversations are mostly about family matters; we sometimes discuss business, but calmly').

Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with friends because we mainly talk about family matters, which are rarely controversial. Occasionally we discuss business, but those conversations are typically practical and cooperative rather than argumentative.

× Especially friends from university.

✓ Especially friends from university are.

Fragment sentence lacking a main verb. The original is a sentence fragment. Add a verb and connect to previous sentence or rewrite: 'Especially friends from university.' could be attached to prior sentence or made complete as 'Especially friends from university are (friends I enjoy chatting with).' Better: 'I especially enjoy chatting with friends from university.'

× This is because you can get away from work when you chat with your university buddies and enjoy the conversation.

✓ This is because I can get away from work when I chat with my university buddies and enjoy the conversation.

Pronoun inconsistency: the question asks about the student's habits, so use first person 'I' not generic 'you'. Keeps subject consistent. Also 'enjoy the conversation' is fine after changing subject.

× I usually chat about my family and my hobby, especially as fathers, we talk about our children and how they are doing in their ordinary life.

✓ I usually chat about my family and my hobbies; especially as fathers, we talk about our children and how they are doing in their ordinary lives.

Several issues: 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' if referring generally. The clause 'especially as fathers, we ...' is awkward but acceptable; ensure plural agreement 'lives' for 'children' or 'we'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid comma splice.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend. I believe that the more more person in the conversation is involved, the relative.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. I believe that the more people are involved in the conversation, the less personal it becomes.

Problems: repeated word 'more more' and incorrect comparative structure 'the relative'. Correct comparative requires 'the more ..., the less ...'. Also 'person' should be plural 'people' when referring generally. Provide complete comparative clause.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. There are several reasons to that.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. There are several reasons for that.

Preposition error: use 'for' after 'reasons' ('reasons for that'). 'Face to face' is acceptable; could be hyphenated when used adjectivally.

× ... there is there is more information in the conversation like body language and facial express.

✓ ... there is more information in the conversation, such as body language and facial expressions.

Redundancy 'there is there is' and wrong word form 'facial express' should be noun 'facial expressions'. Use 'such as' or 'like' and plural 'expressions' for clarity.

× I don't know, normally argue with friends because our topics are rather family related things so there's not much to argue about.

✓ I don't normally argue with friends because our topics are mostly family-related, so there's not much to argue about.

Word order and missing auxiliary: 'I don't know, normally argue with friends' is incorrect. Use 'I don't normally argue with friends' or 'I don't know; I don't normally argue with friends'. Also 'family related things' should be hyphenated 'family-related' and 'mostly' fits better than 'rather'.

× Rather, we discuss business we have.

✓ Rather, we discuss the business we have or issues related to work.

Original is vague and lacks clarity. 'Business we have' is unnatural; add an article 'the' and optionally clarify 'issues related to work'. This completes the sentence and provides natural phrasing.