ChattingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like chatting with friends?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I like chatting with my friend 'cause I think chatting is a kind of relaxing things to do and every time I chat with my friend I feel we get closer, so it's a very nice thing to chat do.

Giám khảo

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Thí sinh

Well, I usually chat with my friends about the hobbies and recent events. Umm, you know, we kind of like gossip and we like to gossip with each other. And with a lot of things going on, we have to update, share updates and opinions, umm, catch up on news and trends.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Thí sinh

Well, it depends. Basically I prefer to chat with only with my friends 'cause you know, we are very close to, we are so connected and we can understand each other without saying a lot. But if you have to, if you have to communicate.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Thí sinh

Well, definitely face to face, you know, 'cause you know, I contact is very important. We, we don't have to say anything, but we can understand each other via social media. It's quite complicated. We have to type all the details to make umm.

Giám khảo

Do you argue with friends?

Thí sinh

Well, umm, sometimes maybe I'm not a quite arguable person, but umm, it depends. If he or she says something wrong with my opinion, I will argue a little bit, but it won't change their mind, so that's OK, I'll just give up.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中要更自然并且更简洁地表达观点,避免重复和口头填充词。可以用一两句概括原因,再加一两个具体例子或感受。注意语法(例如复数形式、冠词)和连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps me relax and strengthens our relationships; for example, after a long day at work, a short conversation with a friend usually makes me feel calmer and more connected.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 减少重复(如多次使用“gossip”与“update”),使用更具体的细节说明话题内容并用连接词组织句子。避免口头语“umm”、“you know”。

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our hobbies and recent events, such as new movies, local festivals, or personal projects. We also share opinions on trending news and recommend books or shows to each other.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并完整阐述原因;避免语句未完成或重复片段。可以给出具体情境说明何时更喜欢群体聊天或单独聊天。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer talking one-on-one because I feel more comfortable and we can discuss personal matters in depth. However, I enjoy group chats when planning events or having fun conversations with many friends.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 注意表达清晰和语法,避免重复词汇。直接说明偏好并给出两个具体理由(如肢体语言、情感交流),并用连接词对比社交媒体的优缺点。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because nonverbal cues and tone make conversations more meaningful. Social media is convenient for quick updates, but it can be misinterpreted and lacks emotional nuance.

Do you argue with friends?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 用更自信和清晰的句子回答,避免模糊表达。说明在何种情况下会争论以及如何处理分歧,最好提供具体例子或结果。

Ví dụ: I rarely argue aggressively, but I will discuss differences calmly if a friend expresses an opinion I disagree with. For instance, if we debate a political issue, I present my views respectfully and accept that we may agree to disagree.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I like chatting is a kind of relaxing things to do

I think chatting is a kind of relaxing thing to do

这里的主语是不可数名词“chatting”,作为“一种(a kind of)...的事情”,后面应使用单数名词“thing”,而不是复数“things”。建议记住固定搭配“a kind of + 单数/不可数名词”。

Singular and plural issue

× every time I chat with my friend I feel we get closer

every time I chat with my friend I feel we get closer

原句语法正确,但注意“my friend”指单一朋友,若泛指多位朋友应改为“my friends”。此处保持不变。

Sentence structure errors

× so it's a very nice thing to chat do

so it's a very nice thing to do, to chat

原句中“chat do”词序错误且重复不必要动词。正确表达是固定结构“a nice thing to do”后可接不定式或动名词作补充,建议使用“to do, to chat”或直接“to chat”。

Incorrect use of articles

× I usually chat with my friends about the hobbies and recent events

I usually chat with my friends about hobbies and recent events

在泛指爱好时不需要定冠词“the”。“the hobbies”暗示特定的一组爱好,但这里应该是泛指“hobbies”。将“the”去掉更自然。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× we kind of like gossip and we like to gossip with each other

we kind of like to gossip and we like gossiping with each other

语法上可以两种形式,但保持一致性更好。这里建议将“like gossip”改为“like to gossip”或“like gossiping”。原句“like gossip”略显口语省略,改为完整形式更标准。

Sentence structure errors

× And with a lot of things going on, we have to update, share updates and opinions, umm, catch up on news and trends

With a lot of things going on, we have to share updates and opinions and catch up on news and trends

原句中“update, share updates”重复且结构不够紧凑。将谓语并列结构整理为“share... and catch up...”使句子更流畅。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to chat with only with my friends 'cause you know, we are very close to, we are so connected

I prefer to chat only with my friends because we are very close and connected

“prefer to chat with only with my friends”中“with”重复,改为“chat only with”。此外“close to”之后缺少宾语,改为并列形容词“close and connected”更合适。

Sentence structure errors

× But if you have to, if you have to communicate.

But if you have to communicate with someone else, it's different

原句不完整,缺少宾语和完整主谓结构。补全为“communicate with someone else”并给出结果从句,使意思完整。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, definitely face to face, you know, 'cause you know, I contact is very important

Well, definitely face-to-face, because I think contact is very important

原句中“'cause you know, I contact is very important”语序和词语选择错误。应为“because I think contact is very important”或“because contact is very important”。此外“face to face”应连字符或作为副词短语“face-to-face”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× We, we don't have to say anything, but we can understand each other via social media

We don't have to say anything, but we can understand each other through social media

“via”和“through”都可用,但在此语境中“through social media”更自然。可选用“via”亦可,但保持一致性。

Sentence structure errors

× It's quite complicated. We have to type all the details to make umm.

It's quite complicated; we have to type all the details to explain things

原句以“to make”结尾不完整,缺少宾语或补足语。补全为“to explain things”或“to make ourselves understood”等,句子才完整。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× sometimes maybe I'm not a quite arguable person

sometimes maybe I'm not a very argumentative person

“arguable”意为“可争辩的”,不用于形容人。应使用“argumentative”表示“爱争论的”。同时“a quite”搭配不当,改为“a very”更自然。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If he or she says something wrong with my opinion, I will argue a little bit

If he or she says something that disagrees with my opinion, I will argue a little bit

“says something wrong with my opinion”表达不自然。可改为“says something that disagrees with my opinion”或“says something I disagree with”。这样语义更清晰。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× but it won't change their mind, so that's OK, I'll just give up

but it won't change their mind, so that's OK, I'll just give up

句子语法基本正确,但“their”指代前文“he or she”,性别中性代词使用可接受。若想更正式可改为“his or her”。原句可保留。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
WrongInappropriate; Illegal; Amiss; Immorality; Misdeed
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