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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like chatting with friends?

Thí sinh

Yeah, chatting with friends can bring a lot of positive things. For example, when you in depression and have a, a terrible mood, and then you can chatting with your, you can chat with your friend and, uh, and uh, get some comfort from your friends.

Giám khảo

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Thí sinh

Well, sometimes we discuss about the strategy of video games that we all played, we all played together and sometimes we talk about the the hard problems about math and physics and help each other to deep those problems.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Thí sinh

Well, I tend to chat with only one friend because in in that way we can get deeper conversation and but not just some surface socialization with a group of people and a real friend can give you a lot of support.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Thí sinh

Yes it's it's depends. When I want to contact with my friends or my family members I tend to communicate and give a conversation with them face to face because it can deliver my real emotions. But for strangers I tend to use social media because it can avoid embarrassed and awkward and it's more.

Giám khảo

Do you argue with friends?

Thí sinh

Yeah, sometimes we usually argue with some certain topics or problems because we have different perspective to solve them. But I believe that after these problems we still be good friends 'cause we understand and interpret each other.

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Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 句子表达较为冗长且有语法和语音停顿问题。回答应更直接并注意时态与主谓一致,减少重复填充词(如 uh),并在支持细节中提供更具体的例子或情境。建议将回答控制在3-4句内:首句直接回答问题,随后给出一两个具体情形并简短总结。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. It helps me relax, for instance when I'm feeling stressed or down, a close friend can cheer me up by listening and offering advice. Overall, talking with friends makes me feel supported.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 内容不错但有语法问题和重复(e.g. 'discuss about', 'we all played'),以及用词不准('deep those problems')。建议用更地道的表达并适当使用连接词,使回答更连贯且具体说明场景或举例。

Ví dụ: We usually talk about video game strategies when we're playing together, and sometimes we discuss difficult math or physics problems to help each other understand concepts better. These conversations are both fun and helpful.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但句子结构有些混乱和重复('in in', 'and but'),可改为两到三句:先给出偏好,然后说明原因并举一具体例子。使用衔接词如 'because' 或 'so' 让逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: I prefer talking one-on-one because it allows for deeper, more personal conversations. For example, when I'm stressed I can discuss my feelings openly with a close friend and get meaningful advice.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 表达有逻辑但存在语法错误('give a conversation', 'avoid embarrassed')和停顿。回答应更简洁并用正确搭配表达原因,还可给出具体场景来支持观点。避免句尾不完整。

Ví dụ: It depends. I prefer face-to-face communication with family and close friends because it's easier to convey emotions. For acquaintances or strangers I usually use social media since it's more convenient and less awkward.

Do you argue with friends?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答逻辑清楚但有语法和词汇搭配问题('we still be good friends', 'different perspective to solve them')。建议用更自然的时态与短语,并简洁说明原因及结果。可以用连接词 'however' 或 'but' 来衔接转折。

Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions on certain topics. However, these arguments usually make our friendship stronger because we learn to understand each other's viewpoints.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× chatting with friends can bring a lot of positive things.

Chatting with friends can bring a lot of positive things.

句子本身“Chatting with friends can bring a lot of positive things.”是正确的動名詞用法,但原句首字母需大写以符合句首规范。此处不用更改动词形式。建议:保持動名詞(-ing)短语作主语。

There be issue

× when you in depression and have a, a terrible mood, and then you can chatting with your, you can chat with your friend and, uh, and uh, get some comfort from your friends.

When you are in depression and feeling terrible, you can chat with your friend and get some comfort from them.

原句缺少系动词“are”,动词形式错误(can chatting 应为 can chat),代词一致也有问题(your friend 与 from your friends 混用)。中文解释:缺少系动词并且助动词后不能接動名詞,應使用原形動詞;代词需保持一致。改进建议:在 be 动词后用形容词/现在分词描述状态,助动词后用动词原形。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× we discuss about the strategy of video games that we all played, we all played together

We discuss the strategies of the video games that we all play together.

“discuss”是及物动词,不需要介词“about”;另外“strategy”与复数和时态要与上下文一致。中文解释:“discuss”后不加 about;注意复数形式和时态一致(play 而非 played,如果是现在常做则用现在时)。建议:去掉 about,调整名词为复数并使用正确时态。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× sometimes we talk about the the hard problems about math and physics and help each other to deep those problems.

Sometimes we talk about the difficult problems in math and physics and help each other solve those problems.

重复使用“about”不自然;“deep those problems”用法错误,应为“solve”或“delve into”。中文解释:不要重复介词;“deep”不是动词用于表示解决问题,应使用“solve”或“delve into”。建议:用“talk about”一次,介词搭配用 in math and physics,使用恰当动词。

Present tense issue

× I tend to chat with only one friend because in in that way we can get deeper conversation and but not just some surface socialization with a group of people and a real friend can give you a lot of support.

I tend to chat with just one friend because in that way we can have deeper conversations rather than just superficial socializing with a group, and a real friend can give you a lot of support.

问题包括重复词(in in)、名词单复数(deeper conversation → deeper conversations)、搭配(surface socialization → superficial socializing)、并列连接词位置混乱(and but)。中文解释:避免重复词,名词单复数与语境一致,修正搭配词,连接词只能选一个。建议:用“just one friend”,“deeper conversations”,“superficial socializing”,并简化连接结构。

Modal verb usage

× Yes it's it's depends.

Yes, it depends.

“depends”是动词,前面不需要“it is”再加动词的重复形式。中文解释:不要重复主语+系动词与动词形式;正确说法为“It depends.” 建议:直接使用“it depends”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× When I want to contact with my friends or my family members I tend to communicate and give a conversation with them face to face because it can deliver my real emotions.

When I want to contact my friends or family members, I tend to communicate with them face to face because it can convey my real emotions.

“contact with”应为“contact someone”或“get in contact with”;“give a conversation”不自然,应为“have a conversation”;“deliver my real emotions”常用动词是“convey”。中文解释:修正介词搭配,使用自然表达“have a conversation”,用“convey”表示传达情感。建议:使用“contact my friends”或“communicate with them face to face”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× But for strangers I tend to use social media because it can avoid embarrassed and awkward and it's more.

But with strangers I tend to use social media because it can avoid embarrassment and awkwardness, and it's more convenient.

“avoid embarrassed and awkward”中应使用名词“embarrassment”和“awkwardness”;“it’s more”不完整需补充比较项(例如 more convenient)。中文解释:形容词与名词的区别需注意,补全不完整句子。建议:用名词形式表示抽象名词,并说明更具体的比较内容。

Modal verb usage

× sometimes we usually argue with some certain topics or problems because we have different perspective to solve them.

Sometimes we argue about certain topics or problems because we have different perspectives on how to solve them.

“argue with”用于与人争论,若指争论某事应用“argue about”;“some certain”重复且冗余;“different perspective to solve”用法不当,应为“different perspectives on how to solve”。中文解释:介词选择和词汇搭配要准确,避免冗余。建议:使用“argue about”,“certain”单独使用,改为“perspectives on how to solve them”。

Present tense issue

× But I believe that after these problems we still be good friends 'cause we understand and interpret each other.

But I believe that after these problems we will still be good friends because we understand and empathize with each other.

“we still be”语法错误,应使用将来时“will still be”;“'cause”非正式口语,应写为“because”;“interpret each other”不自然,表达“理解并产生同理心”可用“empathize”。中文解释:时态要与语义一致(这里谈未来结果用 will),避免非正式缩写,选择更自然的动词。建议:用“will still be good friends”,“empathize with each other”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DeepIn depth; Intense; Profound; Rapt; Far down
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
TerribleDreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
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