Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really like chat because my friend is very funny.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I think I chat about the makeup with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer to with only one friend because I think with one friend chat make me happy and relax.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to social media with friends because communicate face to face make me feel nervous and not comfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because they can be very loud and inconsiderate which made me feel noise. For example, they often interrupt me when I'm talking so I tell them how I feel in. We usually shoot it out commonly.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然並直接針對問題給出完整句子,避免語法錯誤與冗餘。可以擴展一兩句說明原因或感受,並使用正確動詞形式和冠詞。比如說明朋友有趣讓你喜歡聊天的具體理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they have a great sense of humour. Their jokes always cheer me up and make our conversations lively.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具體且語法正確。不要使用不必要的填充語(like "I think")。如果主題是化妝,說明談論哪方面(例如產品、技巧或流行趨勢)。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about makeup products and application tips, such as new foundations, eyeshadow palettes and which brands work best for oily skin.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 句子結構與語法需要改進(例如介詞、時態和單複數)。回答應先明確表態,然後用一至兩句具體原因支持,並使用連接詞使語意流暢。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking one-on-one with a single friend because those conversations feel more personal and relaxed, and I can express myself more freely.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 注意動詞搭配與詞序(例如 'prefer using social media' 或 'prefer to communicate via social media')。可以給出具體原因並用連接詞連接句子,使表達更連貫。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less nervous online, and it is more convenient to stay in touch throughout the day.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 內容需要更清楚與禮貌地描述衝突原因,避免模糊或錯誤的片語(如 'feel noise', 'shoot it out')。用具體例子說明衝突情境,並描述你的反應或如何解決衝突,保持語句簡潔。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends when they interrupt me or speak loudly. For example, if someone keeps cutting me off, I calmly tell them that I want to finish my point, and usually we resolve it by listening to each other.
× Yes, I really like chat because my friend is very funny.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting because my friend is very funny.
原句中使用名词 "chat" 作为动词,缺少动名词形式。英语中在像 "like" 这样的动词后通常接动名词(-ing)表示喜欢做某事。建议将 "chat" 改为动名词 "chatting"。
× I think I chat about the makeup with my friend.
✓ I think I chat about makeup with my friend.
原句中 "the makeup" 使用了不必要的定冠词,且 "makeup" 在这里是不可数名词,表示一般话题时前面不加冠词。根据语境不需要动名词形式,若想强调正在做可改为 "talk about makeup" 或保留 "chat about makeup"。建议使用 "chat about makeup"。
× I think I prefer to with only one friend because I think with one friend chat make me happy and relax.
✓ I think I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting with one friend makes me happy and relaxed.
原句存在多处结构问题:"prefer to with" 是不正确的搭配,应为 "prefer to chat with" 或更自然的 "prefer chatting with";"with one friend chat make" 主语和动词不一致,应改为动名词短语作为主语并保证动词单复数一致("chatting... makes");"relax" 在这里应为形容词 "relaxed" 描述感受。建议重组句子为 "prefer to chat with only one friend" 或 "prefer chatting with one friend"。
× I prefer to social media with friends because communicate face to face make me feel nervous and not comfortable.
✓ I prefer to communicate with friends via social media because communicating face to face makes me feel nervous and uncomfortable.
原句中动词和结构混乱:"prefer to social media" 用法错误,应为 "prefer to communicate ... via social media";"communicate face to face make" 主语与动词不一致,应使用动名词或名词短语并将动词第三人称单数("makes")与主语一致;"not comfortable" 更自然的表达是 "uncomfortable"。建议使用 "communicating face to face makes me feel nervous and uncomfortable"。
× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because they can be very loud and inconsiderate which made me feel noise.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because they can be very loud and inconsiderate, which makes me feel annoyed by the noise.
原句时态和词汇不当:前半句使用一般现在时,后半句却用了过去式 "made",应统一为现在时 "makes";"feel noise" 是不正确搭配,应使用 "feel annoyed by the noise" 或者 "be bothered by the noise"。建议使用 "which makes me feel annoyed by the noise"。
× For example, they often interrupt me when I'm talking so I tell them how I feel in.
✓ For example, they often interrupt me when I'm talking, so I tell them how I feel.
原句末尾多余的介词 "in",使句子结构错误。应去掉该词,并在复合句中在逗号后连接从句。建议为 "so I tell them how I feel"。
× We usually shoot it out commonly.
✓ We usually sort it out.
原句 "shoot it out" 用法不当且意思可能不清楚,且与 "commonly" 冗余。常用表达为 "sort it out"(解决争执)。建议使用更自然的短语 "We usually sort it out" 或者 "We usually resolve it"。