Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I particularly enjoy having conversation with my friends because their laughter always cheers me up and their companionship makes me feel supported. It doesn't matter what we are talk about. Sometimes we discuss silly things and sometimes we share problems, but I always feel better afterwards.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Besides talking about academic things, I usually share everyday experience or amusing story with my friends. For example, I might tell them about finding a great discount at the supermarket yesterday because we are all enjoy laughing together and exchange a useful tips.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer chatting with just one friend because I can have a deep, meaningful conversations and feel more comfortable opening up about personal things. For example, when it's just one person, we can focus on each other without distractions so the talk becomes more honest and helpful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer face to face communication because we can see facial expression and body language which helps. Prefer misunderstandings, for example, when discussing important matters or resolving conflicts. It's easier to understand someone's attitude and tone in person than though through social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I try to avoid arguing because I don't want to damage our relationship and arguments usually don't solve anything. If there is a problem, I prefer to have an open conversation and explain my feelings so we can resolve the conflict together.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 整体回答自然且内容相关,但有少量语法错误和冗余。建议注意动词形式和单复数(例如 'having conversation' 应为 'having conversations' 或 'having a conversation';'what we are talk about' 应为 'what we talk about'),并在句子间使用连接词使回答更紧凑。回答控制在最多四到五句内即可,避免重复表达“feel better”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because their laughter cheers me up and their company supports me. We talk about anything from silly stories to personal problems, and sharing these always helps me feel better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 内容具体但有语法和搭配错误。注意名词单复数和动词形式(例如 'everyday experience' 应为 'everyday experiences','amusing story' 应为 'amusing stories','we are all enjoy' 应为 'we all enjoy','exchange a useful tips' 应为 'exchange useful tips')。尽量用一两个具体例子并用连接词(for example, because, so)明确因果关系,避免冗长。
Ví dụ: Besides academic topics, we often share everyday experiences and funny stories. For example, I recently told them about finding a great discount at the supermarket, which made us laugh and we exchanged useful shopping tips.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答有力并直接,但有小的语法问题('a deep, meaningful conversations' 应为 'deep, meaningful conversations' 或 'a deep, meaningful conversation')。可以再加一两句具体细节说明何种话题更适合一对一交流。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can have deep, meaningful conversations and I feel more comfortable opening up. For instance, I usually discuss personal problems or future plans one-on-one so we can focus without interruptions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点但存在逻辑和语法错误,第二句不通顺('Prefer misunderstandings' 无意义)。应改为完整句并使用连接词解释原因、并给出具体场景。例如:'Face-to-face is better because you can see expressions and avoid misunderstandings, especially during conflicts.' 注意拼写(though → through)和复数形式(facial expression → facial expressions)。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, when resolving a conflict or discussing important matters, it's much easier to judge tone and intention in person.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁自然,理由清楚。可以用更具体的例子说明你如何进行开放式对话(例如使用‘I’陈述或选择合适的时间)。另外可加入一个短语表明结果或频率以丰富答案。
Ví dụ: No, I usually avoid arguments because they can harm relationships and rarely solve anything. If a problem arises, I prefer to have an open conversation using 'I' statements to explain my feelings and agree on a solution together.
× I particularly enjoy having conversation with my friends because their laughter always cheers me up and their companionship makes me feel supported.
✓ I particularly enjoy having conversations with my friends because their laughter always cheers me up and their companionship makes me feel supported.
句子中名词 conversation 应使用复数形式 conversations,与 enjoy + -ing 搭配时表示经常或反复的动作或活动时常用复数。建议在可数名词表示多次或一般性时使用复数。
× It doesn't matter what we are talk about.
✓ It doesn't matter what we are talking about.
原句中动词短语 are talk 用法错误,进行时态应使用 be + 动词的现在分词(talking)。建议在表示正在进行的动作或讨论时使用现在进行时。
× Sometimes we discuss silly things and sometimes we share problems, but I always feel better afterwards.
✓ Sometimes we discuss silly things and sometimes we share problems, but I always feel better afterwards.
此句无需修改。保留原句。
× Besides talking about academic things, I usually share everyday experience or amusing story with my friends.
✓ Besides talking about academic things, I usually share everyday experiences or amusing stories with my friends.
experience 和 story 为可数名词时指具体事件应使用复数形式。句中表示一般性的多次经历或故事,应使用复数以匹配 usually 一类频率副词。
× For example, I might tell them about finding a great discount at the supermarket yesterday because we are all enjoy laughing together and exchange a useful tips.
✓ For example, I might tell them about finding a great discount at the supermarket yesterday because we all enjoy laughing together and exchange useful tips.
句中存在两处错误:1) 'are all enjoy' 中多余的助动词 are,应删除以符合主谓一致,改为 'we all enjoy'(第27项 主谓一致/第6项 现在时);2) 'a useful tips' 中 tips 为复数,前面不应有不定冠词 a,并且 useful tips 不需冠词。建议根据名词单复数一致使用冠词或省略。
× I prefer chatting with just one friend because I can have a deep, meaningful conversations and feel more comfortable opening up about personal things.
✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because I can have a deep, meaningful conversation and feel more comfortable opening up about personal things.
deep, meaningful conversations 中 conversation 应与前面的形容词短语匹配为单数或者改为复数并调整冠词;这里句子主语是 one friend,强调一次深入的谈话,用单数 conversation 更合适。建议形容词与名词形式一致。
× For example, when it's just one person, we can focus on each other without distractions so the talk becomes more honest and helpful.
✓ For example, when it's just one person, we can focus on each other without distractions, so the talk becomes more honest and helpful.
句子语法正确,但缺少逗号以连接两个独立分句。此处不属于列出的错误类型,需要保持原意并微调标点。
× I prefer face to face communication because we can see facial expression and body language which helps.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see facial expressions and body language, which helps.
face to face 应连写为 face-to-face 作为复合形容词;facial expression 应为复数 facial expressions 表示表情的多样性。同时在 which helps 前加逗号使句子更清晰。
× Prefer misunderstandings, for example, when discussing important matters or resolving conflicts.
✓ This helps prevent misunderstandings, for example, when discussing important matters or resolving conflicts.
原句缺少主语和谓语,属于无主句(第23项)/句子结构错误(第26项)。需补全主语和动词以表达完整意思,建议改为 This helps prevent misunderstandings。
× It's easier to understand someone's attitude and tone in person than though through social media.
✓ It's easier to understand someone's attitude and tone in person than through social media.
句中 though 多余且用法不当,造成冗词或双重比较词。应删除 though,仅保留 through social media 表示比较对象。建议在比较时避免重复使用比较词。
× No, I don't. I try to avoid arguing because I don't want to damage our relationship and arguments usually don't solve anything.
✓ No, I don't. I try to avoid arguing because I don't want to damage our relationships, and arguments usually don't solve anything.
原句整体正确,但 relationship 可根据上下文调整为复数 relationships(如果指多个人的关系);若指双方关系也可保持单数。此处给出可选改法并加上逗号连接并列分句以更符合书面表达。
× If there is a problem, I prefer to have an open conversation and explain my feelings so we can resolve the conflict together.
✓ If there is a problem, I prefer to have an open conversation and explain my feelings so that we can resolve the conflict together.
句子语法正确,但在正式书面语中在 so 前加 that 更清晰表目的关系;该改动属于时态或连词细化,不是必须,但能提高表达清晰度。