Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often share secrets and support each other. For instance, when I feel upset, they comfort me, and I do the same for them.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar by using correct verb tenses and prepositions. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Ví dụ: I usually talk about personal secrets and experiences at my company. For example, when I feel frustrated at work, I share my feelings with a close friend, and she comforts me.

Gợi ý: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve coherence by using appropriate linking words. Be more specific and concise in your explanation.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for more personal and meaningful conversations. However, in a group, I usually focus on talking with a close friend to share secrets and personal thoughts.

Gợi ý: Complete your sentences and avoid hesitation. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences with linking words to explain your preference and reasons.

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media, especially at work, because text messages provide a record of conversations, which can be useful in case of disagreements.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with friends because I believe that discussing issues calmly and privately leads to better and faster resolutions. Arguing often causes people to hold onto their emotions.

× When I was upset, they will comfort me and I will do the same things as her.

✓ When I was upset, they would comfort me and I would do the same things for them.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with future tense 'will'. To maintain tense consistency, 'will' should be changed to 'would' to indicate habitual past actions. Also, 'do the same things as her' is unclear; 'do the same things for them' clarifies reciprocal actions.

× When I was upset, they will comfort me and I will do the same things as her.

✓ When I was upset, they would comfort me and I would do the same things for them.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used; it should be 'them' to refer back to 'they'. Also, 'do the same things as her' is awkward; 'do the same things for them' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually talk about my secrets, the things I met in my company with my friends.

✓ I usually talk about my secrets and the things I experience at my company with my friends.

The verb 'met' is incorrectly used to describe experiences; 'met' is past tense of 'meet' meaning to encounter people. The correct verb is 'experience' or 'go through' to describe events or situations.

× For example, when I feel frustrated in my company, I will share with her and she will comfort me for this.

✓ For example, when I feel frustrated at my company, I will share with my friend and she will comfort me.

The pronoun 'her' is vague; specifying 'my friend' clarifies the subject. Also, 'comfort me for this' is awkward; 'comfort me' suffices.

× Well, actually both, but I will choose to chat with one friend more because it's.

✓ Well, actually both, but I prefer to chat with one friend more because it's more personal.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'because it's.' Adding 'more personal' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× But even in a group of people, I will choose to talk with a certain friend so that we can share more secrets and talk about more personal thoughts.

✓ But even in a group of people, I choose to talk with a certain friend so that we can share more secrets and discuss more personal thoughts.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'talk about more personal thoughts' is better expressed as 'discuss more personal thoughts' for formality and clarity.

× Of course, via social media, for example, especially in my work, I'd like to communicate with my colleagues via social media because like the text messages can record some evidence when there are some controversials. So I.

✓ Of course, via social media. For example, especially at work, I like to communicate with my colleagues through social media because text messages can record evidence when there are controversies.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains awkward phrasing. Breaking it into clearer sentences and correcting 'controversials' to 'controversies' improves readability and correctness.

× So I.

✓ So I prefer using social media for communication.

The sentence is incomplete and needs completion to convey the intended meaning.

× No, of course I don't. I never argue with anyone because I think talking something secretly and peacefully can help promote the things better and uh, quickly.

✓ No, of course I don't. I never argue with anyone because I think talking about things quietly and peacefully can help improve matters better and more quickly.

'Talking something secretly' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talking about things quietly'. Also, 'promote the things' is vague; 'improve matters' is clearer.

× When arguing you will stay your thoughts with emotions.

✓ When arguing, you will hold onto your thoughts with emotions.

'Stay your thoughts' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'hold onto your thoughts'. Adding a comma after 'When arguing' improves sentence clarity.