Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I really like chatting with my friends because I am quite a talkative person. I like to share every little things that happens in my life with them which helps strengthen our bond especially now we live far apart. This is this regular communication makes me feel closer to them.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I really chat with my friends about almost everything that happens in my life. For example, I tried the coffee, I found it was delicious and I would recommend the coffee to my friends. I want them to try to and the most. Recently I shared a lot of stress about PR preparing for the eyes test, which helps me feel more supported.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with one or two person that is my best friend. I'm not an E person. I am more like I'll be shy to chat a lot of people.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
If I had the chance, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more personal and allows for allows for better understanding through body language however signs. My friend and I live far apart now so we usually keep in touch through social media almost every day.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends when we have a different perspective on on things. Umm, for example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are very small and don't last long.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达有些错误,如“every little things that happens”应为“every little thing that happens”,且句子结构稍显冗长。建议简化句子,注意主谓一致,并使用更自然的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I am quite talkative. Sharing small details about my life helps us stay close, especially since we live far apart now.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“try to and the most”不完整,且句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使内容更连贯,并注意表达完整。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about many things, like trying new foods. For instance, I recently tried some delicious coffee and recommended it to my friends. Also, I shared my stress about preparing for the IELTS test, which made me feel supported.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“one or two person”应为“one or two people”,且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免口语化错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I am a bit shy and don't feel comfortable talking in large groups.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“allows for allows for”,且“however signs”表达不清。建议简化句子,注意语法和逻辑连接。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can understand body language better. However, since my friends live far away, we usually keep in touch through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“on on”,且口语填充词“Umm”影响流畅度。建议减少重复和填充词,使用更正式的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are usually minor and short-lived.
× I like to share every little things that happens in my life with them which helps strengthen our bond especially now we live far apart.
✓ I like to share every little thing that happens in my life with them which helps strengthen our bond especially now we live far apart.
“things”应为单数“thing”,因为前面有“every”,表示每一个,后面动词“happens”也用单数形式。
× I really chat with my friends about almost everything that happens in my life.
✓ I really chat with my friends about almost everything that happens in my life.
此句无错误,保持原句。
× For example, I tried the coffee, I found it was delicious and I would recommend the coffee to my friends.
✓ For example, I tried the coffee, I found it was delicious and I would recommend the coffee to my friends.
此句时态正确,无需修改。
× I want them to try to and the most.
✓ I want them to try it too, and the most.
“try to”应为“try it”,表示“尝试它”;“and the most”表达不完整,需补充或改为“too”表示“也”。
× Recently I shared a lot of stress about PR preparing for the eyes test, which helps me feel more supported.
✓ Recently I shared a lot of stress about PR preparing for the eye test, which helps me feel more supported.
“eyes test”应为单数“eye test”,因为“eye test”是固定搭配,表示视力测试。
× I prefer to chat with one or two person that is my best friend.
✓ I prefer to chat with one or two people that are my best friends.
“person”应为复数“people”,因为数量超过一个;“is”应改为“are”,主谓一致;“best friend”应改为复数“best friends”。
× I'm not an E person.
✓ I'm not an extroverted person.
“E person”表达不清,应使用完整词汇“extroverted person”表示“外向的人”。
× I am more like I'll be shy to chat a lot of people.
✓ I am more like I'll be shy to chat with a lot of people.
“chat a lot of people”缺少介词“with”,正确表达为“chat with a lot of people”。
× If I had the chance, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more personal and allows for allows for better understanding through body language however signs.
✓ If I had the chance, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more personal and allows for better understanding through body language and facial expressions.
“however signs”表达不清,应改为“and facial expressions”表示“面部表情”,且“allows for”重复,应删除多余部分。
× My friend and I live far apart now so we usually keep in touch through social media almost every day.
✓ My friend and I live far apart now so we usually keep in touch through social media almost every day.
此句无错误,保持原句。
× Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends when we have a different perspective on on things.
✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends when we have different perspectives on things.
“a different perspective”应改为复数“different perspectives”,因为主语是复数“we”。
× Umm, for example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are very small and don't last long.
✓ Umm, for example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are very small and don't last long.
此句无错误,保持原句。