Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Absolutely us I allow chatting with my friends. I everyday get in touch me with my old friends and I always keep in touch. I always try to keep in touch with my friends. It's a little bit useful. Yesterday I I get I got in touch my old friend.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Usually we, uh, check the visa each other about our life. Uh, I express my feelings and also he tell that he expressed his feelings and uh, like this kind of things. We are, we are friendly, so we talk each other about our friendships.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
To tell the truth, I don't like chatting with the inner group, I like alone. I like chat with my friend 1 by 1 because in a group there are lots of people and sometimes I cannot say something and there is some secret thing. So I prefer to chat with my friends by 1/1.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to come to chat with my friends face to face but at the moment I I love in another country so I I I keep in touch with my friends with social media so but I like communicate with my friends face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like argue with my friends. Uh, it's not a good idea to argue. Uh, sometimes I complain, uh, I complain them, but uh, we don't argue. We, uh, respect each other. We try to, uh, help each other and we don't uh, like, uh, like this kind of things.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to form clear, concise sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures to improve naturalness and effectiveness.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I make an effort to keep in touch with my old friends every day because it helps maintain our relationships. For example, just yesterday I contacted one of my close friends to catch up.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise vocabulary and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid filler words like 'uh'.
Ví dụ: Usually, we talk about our personal lives and share our feelings with each other. Since we are close friends, we often discuss our friendship and support one another through different situations.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your preference but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid literal translations like '1 by 1' and use appropriate expressions such as 'one-on-one'. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to explain your reasons.
Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend rather than in a group. In groups, it can be hard to share personal or secret thoughts, so I feel more comfortable having private conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate with my friends face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, since I currently live in another country, I keep in touch with them through social media to stay connected.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words which affect fluency. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely, avoiding unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe it's not productive. Sometimes I may express my complaints, but we always respect and support each other to maintain a good relationship.
× Absolutely us I allow chatting with my friends.
✓ Absolutely, I like chatting with my friends.
The pronoun 'us' is incorrectly used here. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'allow' is incorrect in this context; 'like' is appropriate to express preference.
× I everyday get in touch me with my old friends and I always keep in touch.
✓ Every day, I get in touch with my old friends and always keep in touch.
The phrase 'get in touch me with' is incorrect; 'get in touch with' is the correct expression. Also, 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when used as an adverbial phrase.
× Yesterday I I get I got in touch my old friend.
✓ Yesterday, I got in touch with my old friend.
The sentence has repeated words and missing preposition 'with' after 'in touch'. The past tense 'got' is correct here.
× Usually we, uh, check the visa each other about our life.
✓ Usually, we check in with each other about our lives.
The phrase 'check the visa each other' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'check in with each other'. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.
× Uh, I express my feelings and also he tell that he expressed his feelings and uh, like this kind of things.
✓ I express my feelings and he also tells me about his feelings and things like that.
The verb 'tell' needs to be in third person singular 'tells' to agree with 'he'. The phrase 'like this kind of things' is awkward; 'things like that' is more natural.
× We are, we are friendly, so we talk each other about our friendships.
✓ We are friendly, so we talk to each other about our friendships.
The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to the person spoken to: 'talk to each other'.
× To tell the truth, I don't like chatting with the inner group, I like alone.
✓ To tell the truth, I don't like chatting in a group; I like being alone.
'Inner group' is incorrect; 'in a group' is correct. Also, 'I like alone' is incorrect; it should be 'I like being alone'.
× I like chat with my friend 1 by 1 because in a group there are lots of people and sometimes I cannot say something and there is some secret thing.
✓ I like to chat with my friend one by one because in a group there are lots of people and sometimes I cannot say certain things and there are some secrets.
The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to chat' or 'chatting'. '1 by 1' should be 'one by one'. 'Say something' is vague; 'say certain things' is clearer. 'There is some secret thing' should be plural 'there are some secrets'.
× So I prefer to chat with my friends by 1/1.
✓ So I prefer to chat with my friends one on one.
The phrase 'by 1/1' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'one on one'.
× I prefer to come to chat with my friends face to face but at the moment I I love in another country so I I I keep in touch with my friends with social media so but I like communicate with my friends face to face.
✓ I prefer to chat with my friends face to face, but at the moment I live in another country, so I keep in touch with my friends through social media. However, I like to communicate with my friends face to face.
'Come to chat' is unnecessary; 'chat' suffices. 'I love in another country' is incorrect; it should be 'I live in another country'. 'Keep in touch with my friends with social media' should be 'through social media'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.
× No, I don't like argue with my friends.
✓ No, I don't like to argue with my friends.
After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to argue'.
× Sometimes I complain, uh, I complain them, but uh, we don't argue.
✓ Sometimes I complain, uh, I complain to them, but we don't argue.
The verb 'complain' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being complained to: 'complain to them'.
× We, uh, respect each other. We try to, uh, help each other and we don't uh, like, uh, like this kind of things.
✓ We respect each other. We try to help each other and we don't like these kinds of things.
'Like this kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of things' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun.