Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I'm so extroverted person」は「I'm an extroverted person」とするべきです。また、「when I was chat from the other people」は不自然で、「when I chat with other people」などに修正が必要です。より自然で正確な英語表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with friends because I am an extroverted person, and talking with others always improves my mood.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「these events are happened」は「events that have happened」や「recent events」などに直すべきです。また、「or like just our feelings」も不自然なので、「or simply our feelings」などにすると良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about daily news, such as recent events in our community, as well as our feelings, like the difficulties of exams or experiences from recent trips.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。「the water one」は誤りで、「the latter one」や「one-on-one」など正しい表現を使いましょう。また、理由の説明も整理して簡潔に述べることが必要です。話の流れを論理的に構成し、明確に伝える練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, it's hard to know who understands me or who I should talk to.

Gợi ý: 「face to face」は前置詞の使い方が間違っています。「communicate face-to-face」とするのが正しいです。また、「in phase two phase」は意味不明なので、「in face-to-face communication」などに直しましょう。理由も簡潔に述べ、冗長な表現を避けることが大切です。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better than social media.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法や表現が不自然です。「make a good relationship between my friends」は「maintain good relationships with my friends」に直すと自然です。また、「try to not, I try not to make some trouble with between our friends」は冗長なので、「I try to avoid conflicts with my friends」と簡潔に表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with my friends because I try to maintain good relationships and avoid conflicts.

× Personally I think yes because I'm so extroverted person and when I was chat from the other people my feeling is better.

✓ Personally, I think yes because I'm a very extroverted person and when I chat with other people, my feelings are better.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'extroverted person' and uses 'was chat' incorrectly instead of 'chat'. Also, 'my feeling is better' should be plural 'feelings are better' to match the context. Adding commas improves clarity.

× About mostly about the Daily News, such as these events are happened in our community or like just our feelings, such as it's about the difficulty of the exams or the experience or like the recent trips.

✓ Mostly about the daily news, such as events that have happened in our community or just our feelings, like the difficulty of exams, experiences, or recent trips.

The phrase 'these events are happened' is incorrect; 'have happened' is the correct present perfect form. Also, 'About mostly about' is redundant and awkward; 'Mostly about' suffices. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer the water one, which is only one friend.

✓ I prefer the latter one, which is only one friend.

The word 'water' is a mishearing or typo for 'latter'. Also, 'one friend' is singular and correct here, but the phrase needed correction for clarity.

× It's because umm, if the situation that there are a lot of people around us, it's I don't know like who can understand my umm talking and also I don't know understand who can I talk to you someone, So that's why.

✓ It's because, if there are a lot of people around us, I don't know who can understand what I'm saying, and I also don't know who I can talk to. So that's why.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Correcting the sentence structure and word order clarifies the meaning. 'I don't know understand' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't know who can understand'. Also, 'talk to you someone' is incorrect; it should be 'talk to someone'.

× Oh, it's absolutely communicate with face to face.

✓ Oh, I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'communicate face to face' or 'prefer to communicate face to face'. Also, 'it's absolutely communicate' is ungrammatical; 'I absolutely prefer to communicate' is better.

× It's because umm, from, uh, social media, we can't understand how they feel about like talking, but instead, umm, in phase two phase, we can understand their feelings, like their emotion that she feels.

✓ It's because, through social media, we can't understand how they feel when talking, but instead, in face-to-face communication, we can understand their feelings and emotions.

The phrase 'from social media' is better expressed as 'through social media'. 'Phase two phase' is a mishearing of 'face to face'. Also, 'like their emotion that she feels' is awkward; 'their feelings and emotions' is clearer.

× I don't think so. I tried to uh, make a good relationship between my friends, so I try to not, I try not to make some umm, trouble with between our friends. So probably I think it's no.

✓ I don't think so. I try to maintain good relationships with my friends, so I try not to cause any trouble between us. So, probably, I think not.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly ('I tried' and 'I try'). Using 'try to maintain' is better than 'make a good relationship'. 'Make some trouble with between our friends' is incorrect; 'cause any trouble between us' is correct. Also, 'I think it's no' is ungrammatical; 'I think not' or 'I don't think so' is better.