Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I have many friends. I talk, I talk to the dream of life, the option of life, the desire of life.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually talk about daily life and interesting ideals.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
The preferred with only one friend. I have a best friend in high school. We talk about daily life and the teacher, the classmates and our dream for the future.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Refer to communicate face to face rather than social media because I think more per personal and comfortable to me and it's deeper our connections.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I appeared with my best friend in high school and for example I want to I wanted to play ping pong but but he want to play the basketball but we respected other clients and option so that's why.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然,表达重复且不够清晰,建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复,并用具体内容丰富答案。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my dreams and life goals with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较简单,缺少具体细节,建议增加具体话题和理由,使答案更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually chat about our daily experiences and interesting ideas, like new hobbies or plans for the weekend.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 语法和表达有误,建议使用完整句子并注意时态,同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can have deeper conversations about our daily life, teachers, classmates, and future dreams.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅且有语法错误,建议使用正确句式表达偏好,并说明原因,注意连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than via social media because it feels more personal and helps build deeper connections.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱且表达不清,建议用简单明了的句子描述争论的原因和结果,注意时态和词汇准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have argued with my best friend before. For example, I wanted to play ping pong, but he preferred basketball. However, we respected each other's choices and didn't let it affect our friendship.
× I talk, I talk to the dream of life, the option of life, the desire of life.
✓ I talk about the dreams of life, the options of life, and the desires of life.
原句结构混乱,缺少介词,导致句意不清。应使用介词'about'引出谈论的内容,并且名词复数形式更符合语境。
× I usually talk about daily life and interesting ideals.
✓ I usually talk about daily life and interesting ideas.
原句中'ideals'(理想)用词不当,应为'ideas'(想法),更符合日常聊天内容。
× The preferred with only one friend.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend.
原句缺少主语和谓语,结构不完整。应补充主语'I'和谓语'prefer to chat',使句子完整。
× We talk about daily life and the teacher, the classmates and our dream for the future.
✓ We talk about daily life, the teachers, the classmates, and our dreams for the future.
名词'teacher'和'dream'应使用复数形式'teachers'和'dreams',因为谈论的是多个老师和多个梦想。
× Refer to communicate face to face rather than social media because I think more per personal and comfortable to me and it's deeper our connections.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because I think it is more personal and comfortable for me, and it deepens our connections.
原句中'Refer to communicate'用法错误,应为'I prefer to communicate';'face to face'前缺少介词;'per personal'应为'more personal';'comfortable to me'应为'comfortable for me';'it's deeper our connections'结构错误,应为'it deepens our connections'。
× Yes, I appeared with my best friend in high school and for example I want to I wanted to play ping pong but but he want to play the basketball but we respected other clients and option so that's why.
✓ Yes, I argued with my best friend in high school. For example, I wanted to play ping pong but he wanted to play basketball, but we respected each other's choices and opinions, so that's why.
'appeared'用词错误,应为'argued';时态应统一为过去时;'want'应为'wanted';'the basketball'中'the'不必要;'clients'应为'choices'或'opinions';句子结构混乱,需拆分并调整顺序。