Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with friends. For example, I can chat with my best friend continuously for a year because we are like minded people so we can show common topics and hobbies with each other.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat fictions and two dimension character, A two dimension characters with my best friends because we are both interested in these things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, in my opinion, I prefer to chat. With only one friend because I think. What I need to say is very private. Therefore, I don't need any other one to interrupt me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, I think I prefer to communicate via social media because I am an introvert person in the real world. I may feel nervous and shy to talk with them, but in the internet I can release my real. A characteristic.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, I seldom argue with my friend because I'd like to avoid avoid argument between I and my friends and I because I think this, this action will hurt ourselves.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达不够简洁,且部分用词不准确,如“show common topics”应改为“share common topics”。建议简化句子结构,避免冗长,提升表达的清晰度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, I have been talking with my best friend for over a year because we share many common interests and hobbies.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“chat fictions and two dimension character”不符合英语习惯。建议使用正确的词汇和句式,明确表达内容。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about fiction stories and two-dimensional characters with my best friend because we both find these topics interesting.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中断句不连贯,存在语法错误,且表达不够流畅。建议合并短句,使用连贯的表达方式,并注意语法正确。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I often talk about private matters and don't want others to interrupt.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不完整,且“release my real. A characteristic”表达不清。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达内心感受。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted in real life. I often feel nervous and shy when talking face-to-face, but online I can express my true self more comfortably.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误,如“avoid avoid argument between I and my friends and I”。建议简化句子,避免重复,使用正确的语法。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to avoid conflicts, as I believe arguments can hurt our relationships.
× I usually chat fictions and two dimension character, A two dimension characters with my best friends because we are both interested in these things.
✓ I usually chat about fictions and two-dimensional characters with my best friends because we are both interested in these things.
“fictions”应为不可数名词,通常不加复数;“two dimension character”应为复数形式“two-dimensional characters”,且“two-dimensional”需要连字符。
× I usually chat fictions and two dimension character, A two dimension characters with my best friends because we are both interested in these things.
✓ I usually chat about fictions and two-dimensional characters with my best friends because we are both interested in these things.
动词“chat”后应接介词“about”表示“聊天关于某事”。
× Well, in my opinion, I prefer to chat. With only one friend because I think. What I need to say is very private.
✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think what I need to say is very private.
句子断裂,导致结构不完整,应合并为一句完整句子。
× Well, I seldom argue with my friend because I'd like to avoid avoid argument between I and my friends and I because I think this, this action will hurt ourselves.
✓ Well, I seldom argue with my friends because I'd like to avoid arguments between my friends and me since I think this action will hurt ourselves.
“between I and my friends”应改为“between my friends and me”,宾格形式“me”正确;“argument”应为复数“arguments”;“avoid avoid”重复,应删除一个。