Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite natural and personal, which is good. However, it is a bit repetitive and some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Try to be more concise and use clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my three brothers. We often talk about our future plans and share our difficult experiences. I appreciate these conversations because they strengthen our brotherly bond and allow me to express my feelings openly.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the topic but lacks clarity and coherence. Some phrases are confusing, and the structure is disorganized. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific about the topics you discuss.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about our career development and planning outdoor activities like hiking trips. We also talk about how we start our days casually and organize our plans for upcoming trips together.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses a clear preference but is somewhat confusing due to awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to structure your sentences more clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one close friend who knows me well rather than a group. This is because when you ask for advice, a single friend can give you accurate guidance, whereas groups often have differing opinions that might confuse you.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but some sentences are a bit awkward. Try to use more natural expressions and linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If my friends live nearby and have time, I prefer meeting face-to-face at a cafe. However, if they are busy or far away, communicating through social media is also convenient for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is interesting but somewhat confusing due to unclear expressions and grammar errors. Try to clarify your ideas and use simpler, more direct sentences to express your thoughts.

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends. In fact, they call me Buddha because I stay calm and express my opinions gently. I prefer to avoid arguments and usually advise my friends to do the same.

× I love talking to them about my futures and about my hard times and bad times that I had, and sometimes expressing them those feelings.

✓ I love talking to them about my future and about the hard times and bad times that I have had, and sometimes expressing those feelings to them.

The word 'futures' should be singular 'future' because it refers to the general concept of what lies ahead. Also, 'hard times and bad times that I had' should be 'that I have had' to correctly use the present perfect tense for past experiences relevant to the present. The phrase 'expressing them those feelings' is incorrect; it should be 'expressing those feelings to them' to correctly place the indirect and direct objects.

× I usually talk about our career growth to about planning a trip or doing some hikes and with friends I mostly talk about how we casually start out days and how we are going to do a plan, do a trip or crash our trip.

✓ I usually talk about our career growth, planning a trip, or doing some hikes, and with friends, I mostly talk about how we casually start our days and how we are going to plan or go on a trip or crash our trip.

The phrase 'talk about our career growth to about planning a trip' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed. Also, 'start out days' should be 'start our days' for correct expression. 'Do a plan' is incorrect; it should be 'plan' or 'make a plan'. The sentence needed clearer prepositional usage and phrasing.

× I would prefer chatting with or only one friend, a specific person that knows me most recent with a group of people.

✓ I would prefer chatting with only one friend, a specific person who knows me most recently, rather than with a group of people.

The phrase 'with or only one friend' is incorrect; 'or' should be removed. 'That knows me most recent' should be 'who knows me most recently' because 'who' refers to people and 'most recently' is the correct adverb form. The sentence structure was also unclear and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× If you are living closer or they have time to just come in a cafe or a coffee shop and talk to me in face to face, then that's OK.

✓ If you are living closer or they have time to just come to a cafe or a coffee shop and talk to me face to face, then that's OK.

The preposition 'in' before 'a cafe' is incorrect; it should be 'to' to indicate movement towards a place. Also, 'in face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'face to face' without a preposition.

× Oh I literally argue with my friends, even my friends call me Buddha because I have the ability to not argue or just give my opinion smoothly in a comment piece way.

✓ Oh, I literally argue with my friends; even my friends call me Buddha because I have the ability not to argue or to give my opinion smoothly in a calm and peaceful way.

The phrase 'ability to not argue' is better expressed as 'ability not to argue' for correct infinitive placement. 'In a comment piece way' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'in a calm and peaceful way' better conveys the intended meaning. Also, punctuation was added for clarity.