Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress and strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确，词汇使用错误，句子不连贯。建议使用简单清晰的句子，具体说明聊天内容，并使用适当的连接词。

Ví dụ: Usually, we talk about people we know and also discuss the latest fashion trends because we both like shopping.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子解释原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to focus and have a meaningful conversation.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议明确表达偏好，并用具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person's true feelings better.

Gợi ý: 回答基本表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确，句子不够连贯。建议使用正确的语法和连接词，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we always resolve our conflicts peacefully.

× Yes, chatting with friends makes me realize my stress also.

✓ Yes, chatting with friends also helps me relieve my stress.

这里'stress'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。原句中'my stress also'表达不清，改为'relieve my stress'更符合表达习惯。

× We can bite, we can increase our friendship by treating each other.

✓ We can chat, we can increase our friendship by treating each other well.

原句中'We can bite'用词错误，应为'chat'表示聊天；'treating each other'后应加副词修饰，表示友好对待。

× Although I would like you to, I would like share my experience and.

✓ Although I would like to, I would like to share my experience.

句子结构不完整，缺少动词不定式'to share'，且结尾不完整，应去掉多余的'and'。

× Usually we charge the gospel about the person who is we are familiar with, although we also check the the new list of fashion trends because we will like both both of we like to buy some.

✓ Usually we share the news about people we are familiar with, and we also check the new list of fashion trends because we both like to buy some.

'charge the gospel'用词错误，应为'share the news'；'the person who is we are familiar with'结构混乱，应简化为'people we are familiar with'；'will like both both of we like to buy some'语法错误，改为'both like to buy some'。

× No, I would like to chat with one person rather than chat with a group of people because I think if I try to a group of people I need to spend my attention to everyone and I also I can't focus on everyone what they say but if just what?

✓ No, I would like to chat with one person rather than with a group of people because I think if I talk to a group of people, I need to pay attention to everyone and I can't focus on what everyone says.

'try to a group of people'用词错误，应为'talk to a group of people'；'spend my attention to'应为'pay attention to'；句尾不完整，去掉无意义部分。

× Yes, because sometimes if we just use, uh, some technique communication device or use cell phone telephone to communicate, we can realize the reality ideas of of that person.

✓ Yes, because sometimes if we just use some technical communication devices or use a cell phone to communicate, we can understand the real ideas of that person.

'technique communication device'应为'technical communication devices'；'cell phone telephone'重复，应简化为'cell phone'；'realize the reality ideas'表达不当，应为'understand the real ideas'。

× But if we face to face train.

✓ But if we communicate face to face,

句子不完整且结构错误，'face to face train'无意义，应改为'communicate face to face'并补全句子。

× Sure is.

✓ Sure, I do.

回答中缺少主语和谓语，'Sure is'不符合英语表达习惯，应改为'Sure, I do'。

× I think it is common to everyone because even we are friends sometimes maybe we have different opinion, different perspectives that will lead to we have some arguments.

✓ I think it is common to everyone because even though we are friends, sometimes we may have different opinions and perspectives that lead to some arguments.

'different opinion'应为复数'different opinions'；'lead to we have some arguments'结构错误，应为'lead to some arguments'。

× But I think it's fine. Even though we have conflicts, we can dissolve and we can also can.

✓ But I think it's fine. Even though we have conflicts, we can resolve them and move on.

'we can dissolve'用词错误，应为'resolve conflicts'；'we can also can'重复，应简化为'and move on'。