Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. We often meet for drinks and discuss our lives, which I believe greatly benefits our mental health.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and repetition. Improve sentence structure by using correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: The topics depend on the friends, but usually we talk about daily problems, relationships, and life goals. This helps us feel supported and understood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Work on sentence clarity and grammar, especially verb forms and prepositions. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer chatting with one or two people because you can listen more attentively and feel more supported. In larger groups, people tend to be more independent.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Use linking words to contrast ideas and explain your opinion effectively.

Ví dụ: I completely prefer face-to-face communication because social media feels impersonal. While social media is useful for quick updates, it cannot replace face-to-face interactions where you can see physical expressions, which are very important.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has minor grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with friends. I'm an easygoing and peaceful person, so I avoid controversial topics and prefer to focus on positive conversations, which I find more helpful.

× I often go with friends to have some drinks and talk about our life and that I think that is have it has a lot of benefits for our mental health.

✓ I often go with friends to have some drinks and talk about our lives, and I think that it has a lot of benefits for our mental health.

The phrase 'talk about our life' should be 'talk about our lives' because 'life' here refers to multiple individuals' lives, so plural form is appropriate (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). Also, 'that I think that is have it has' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I think that it has' to maintain proper verb agreement and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type ID:26).

× The main topics are depend on the friends, but I would say that our our daily problems, relationships and our life goals.

✓ The main topics depend on the friends, but I would say that our daily problems, relationships, and life goals.

The phrase 'are depend' is incorrect; 'depend' is a verb and does not need 'are' before it (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). Also, the repeated 'our' is redundant and should be removed. The list should be separated by commas for clarity.

× I definitely prefer to to speak just with one or two people because you are more listen and you feel more supported because if it's a larger group like everyone is on their own.

✓ I definitely prefer to speak just with one or two people because you listen more and feel more supported; if it's a larger group, everyone is on their own.

The phrase 'you are more listen' is incorrect; 'listen' is a verb and should not be used with 'are' here. The correct form is 'you listen more' (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). Also, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses for clarity.

× I completely prefer face to face interactions because I think that social media is so impersonal just it works for quick updates about our lives, but completely not for it's irreplaceable our face to face interactions because you can see their physical expression that it means a lot.

✓ I completely prefer face-to-face interactions because I think that social media is so impersonal; it just works for quick updates about our lives, but it is completely irreplaceable compared to our face-to-face interactions because you can see their physical expressions, which means a lot.

The phrase 'for it's irreplaceable our face to face interactions' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'it is completely irreplaceable compared to our face-to-face interactions' to convey the intended meaning (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× No, I don't. I'm quite an easygoing person and peaceful, so when I see that a controversial topic is on the table I try to just avoid it and speak about positive things. I think it's it is more helpful that rather than arguing with them.

✓ No, I don't. I'm quite an easygoing and peaceful person, so when I see that a controversial topic is on the table, I try to just avoid it and speak about positive things. I think it is more helpful than arguing with them.

The phrase 'I think it's it is more helpful that rather than arguing' is incorrect. It should be 'I think it is more helpful than arguing' to correctly use the comparative conjunction 'than' (Grammar Problem Type ID:16). Also, 'easygoing person and peaceful' should be 'easygoing and peaceful person' for correct adjective order (Grammar Problem Type ID:18).